[Showbiz] Better to Build a Career Than Fall in Love

That's it?! QAQ, please don't be angry. To be honest, I think the content does not match the copywriting and the title of the article.

To be honest, I thought this article was not good after reading the comments, but I saw that the author's other writings were quite good, so I clicked in and read it. To be honest, I felt that the writing was quite good, but in the end I felt that the ending was too rushed, and I felt that a lot of things were not written. The author should write more if he has time, it is very good, come on!

I really don't have much food. Here we go again. QAQ. Well, why just a big bed? There is only one apartment on the first floor, so this apartment must be very big, right? It seems that the heroine's family is rich, and even if she lives alone, she should have all the equipment and everything. It was the same before, when Quan Zhilong came and said he only had a few sets of beds and quilts, but it actually looked a bit buggy.

If you are able to revise and correct the text, it means that you have paid back your hard work. But let's talk about my feelings after reading the article. It's just about the article itself. There is no malice. I also like to read Quan Zhilong fanfics. I rarely write in Chinese these days. I also hope that you can write better and better, so that I can have food~ ① I feel that the plot development of this article is a bit too "author-flow", that is, the author may be very clear about what he wants to express, but after writing it and presenting it to the readers through words, the article changes. When I see it now, I feel "inexplicable". The system seems to be making excuses for the female protagonist's behavior that from the male protagonist's point of view is simply a serious illness. But to be honest, if the male protagonist had a clearer mind, he might just think that the female protagonist is crazy, so what is she doing? ②The plot between the heroine and other cannon fodder girls is too old-fashioned and childish, making it awkward and uncomfortable to watch. ③I think the most fatal problem so far is that some plot developments seem to be really weird and lack a sense of reality. It seems that some bloody plots are just for the development of the plot. This is my feeling after reading the article. I hope the more I write, the better. I am short of food, really, QAQ

If the heroine tells her so-called good friend about the system, then the heroine's brain...

It makes me laugh so hard that this female star talks so brainlessly, how can she survive in the entertainment industry?

The heroine's character is too cool

I think it's well written, but it's too short and leaves much to be desired. Let's add some extras!

I always feel like it's over a bit too soon. The copy talks about starting a business, but there doesn't seem to be much content about starting a business. But let's keep working hard to produce food.

Seeing this, I really don't understand the task of the system. Your imagination is blown 6