A Guide to Starting a Business in Another World

The subject matter is quite attractive, but the ending is too hasty. I feel like I could have written a medium-length novel.

Of sharing. The novel makes people feel relaxed and happy after reading it.

Thanks for the limited fee! Not bad!

It ended so hastily. Will there be a second part? The author is great

When I read the text "Reborn in my own body in a parallel world", I thought it was another tangled stand-in. After reading the text, I found out that it was just an ordinary borrowed corpse to bring back the soul, about catching ghosts and planting trees to cultivate them in a different world. It can be seen that the author wanted to write a main line with several short stories, but I felt that the writing style was not satisfactory. For example, the ending of Water Ghost is like writing an essay, the narration in the middle of Fox Marriage is a bit fluent, and the ending of Painted Ghost ends abruptly... It is not a big problem that the emotional line is not emphasized. It was originally planted by one hand, and it is better to say that it is a lover than a relative. However, the ending is indeed quite hasty. As the seniors said in the comments, "it feels like the story is over as soon as it begins." The article is still worth reading. Keep up the good work, author.

Why not plant another seed?

It feels like the story is over just after it started. It's too hasty.

Forever, a heart will last forever!

The ending was a little rushed. How did the village chief's wife get a lot of leaves? What happened to the human-shaped tree in the Suicide Temple? Will human-shaped trees eventually become like humans? If so, do we still need to get married and reproduce? If they are different, how can the lifespan and abilities of humanoid trees be balanced with those of native humans?

I always feel like I could write a longer one~ Congratulations on the completion!