A Fanfic Epilogue to A Bow to Heaven and Earth
一拜天地同人番外
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 53k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
23Chapters
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Why is there no process? The math teacher said there must be a process, woo woo woo
Woo woo woo, you two, in modern times, you must be good woo woo woo, who dares to call you two perverts again, I, I will be the first to rush in and smash that person's head.
Sorry, I would like to ask, who is the author of Yibaitiandi? Where can I see it? I want to see it too.
Well, it means that there will definitely be some side effects in restoring memory. After all, it is a new memory for the person involved. So I think it can be added at noon? For example, Qin Shu suddenly remembered when he was in the cafeteria, and then he started to have a headache. After he stopped, the man carrying the soup bumped into him. Or maybe I remembered it on the way, and after arriving at the cafeteria, I was thinking about something and didn't pay attention to the road. I just think it's too abrupt, so there's no other point in giving me some suggestions () Ah, but it's very well written.
The language organization and logic are a bit messy. Behavior, language, psychological description, the transition between these different descriptions is not smooth. Everything is good, but the description of the text is a bit messy. Personal evaluation: I'm not good at Chinese, so I can't give any specific suggestions. I can only tell that there are flaws. Everything is fine, but the text is not easy to read. I wonder if other readers feel this way? Maybe it's a problem with my understanding.
The author's writing is good, but there are some minor shortcomings. First, it is a bit stiff in some places and a bit awkward in some places. But there are a few places where the plot is told too quickly, which makes people feel weird.
Thank you for being gentle to them
Hahahahahahahahahaha it turns out to be a gift from Zhongyuan hhh Great writing in big letters! Come on Duck!
I have automatically figured out 108 bathroom positions√
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