Dancing at Your Fingertips

This punctuation mark is very common in Korean cuisine. But in fact, there is no such punctuation in Chinese, it is only found in chat. Someone who didn't know much about Korean passed by.

Others have commented a lot. . I feel sorry for myself. . Not much to say about teasing. . . Come on, fellow author. . .

"Alas..." Luo Qiujiu frowned and held his chin and said, "I don't know why, but now it seems that the whole school knows that you are going to participate in that grand prix! And because everyone knows that you can't play the piano... So," she considered it for a moment and said euphemistically, "some people say that you used some very bad means to get into this grand prix in order to gain a position." The people in this world are really noobs. . . . . . . . Participate too. . It's not an award. . . That one wants to go to the stage to see real Kungfu. . . . They actually thought that it was the female protagonist who used all kinds of tricks to compete. . . I really can't play. . It's a big loss if you lose face on stage. . .

In fact, I feel like the ideas in brackets can be taken out and incorporated into the article. Nongdiwen. . The tone is brisk. . Then at the beginning of the chapter, I have to go a little deeper. . Kindness. . What's inside? . Personal feeling. . . Adults who generally like to have a little depth at the beginning of the chapter intend to use this contrast to show the depth in the lightness of the text. But Nongdi didn't feel the depth in his later writings. . It feels pure and light. . .

Well, after taking a general look at it, in terms of the plot arrangement of the first three chapters, the first half of the first chapter didn't feel particularly smooth when it came to the title. . The second half of the first chapter felt a bit interesting and provocative. . The second chapter is quite attractive in terms of plot. . Then there was too much background narration in the third chapter which dampened my enthusiasm to the point of cooling down. . . I feel like explaining the background. . Wouldn't it be better to let the readers become more familiar with the characters and the plot first, and then get more interested before proceeding? Or introduce it a little bit first, and then take your time later. . . (Well... Maybe it's my personal problem... It's a bit difficult to memorize a lot of characters and backgrounds right after the opening scene...)

So we will ignore your comments.

It's not that I want to make a fool of myself, or that I want to do something else. After all, even if someone shoots a good thing, as long as there are many people who support it, the person who shoots it will be eliminated. I just have a question, why can the female protagonist enter the preliminary round all of a sudden? Not to mention how she entered the preliminary round, I think just writing about her state of mind and what is in her heart is far from enough to express musical resonance. I don't expect Little C to overhaul it. I just hope that Little C can pay attention to some things that although they are details, they must not be ignored, otherwise it will become an essay, without nutrition and meaning. Why don't other people's descriptions work well? Can you say that it was taken away in one stroke? That Bai is like this, Shu is like this, and I can't even say that about Ai. Just like Xiao An said, I can't tell what kind of person he is. Ordinary doesn't mean that the writing is not good. If there are no characteristics, there will be no motivation to attract people to read, right? However, one thing must be admitted. From the beginning to the present, Little C has indeed listened to what we said, and has processed the description of the environment. At this point, I saw the shining point, and I saw Little C's efforts. I believe that as long as Little C continues to develop in all aspects, the writing style will improve. In today's society where literary works are everywhere, it is rare for Xiao C to decide to develop into a drama, but it does not mean that he can get more appreciation without working hard. Perhaps because I am not a music major, I cannot comment too much on Xiao C's professional knowledge, but I still want to say that Xiao C's writing contains many things in the professional field. If I were also a piano player, I might appreciate Xiao C from this point, but unfortunately, I am not. But an article cannot be given a high score just because you have a lot of professional stuff. A good article should be based on several descriptions, including conception, subject matter, etc. Is it novel or novel? Is it unconventional enough? These are all aspects to consider. Little C, I have to say that when I first read this article, I thought writing music had fallen into a cliché. But after reading the article, I also saw a lot of hard work, and I felt relieved. What I have to say is that maybe others will like the heroine, but I just like the person who takes pictures (maybe 54... Maybe 54). I really don't like the heroine very much, assuming the current heroine. If the heroine becomes more mature and sensible later on, it may change my view of her. It's good not to admit defeat, but I think she has less personality than the protagonist in Xiaobai's novel, which is not good. Maybe this heroine is a "late bloomer" type. I am very serious about this. I like the hardships on the road to success, but I don't like the protagonist who never makes progress. Being so unreasonable once or twice can be said to be cute, innocent, and childish but you don't understand. If it happens too much, you will feel bored. Okay, these are the comments I wrote for you when I was bored. It seems that there are a lot of things that are confusing, but I really want to work harder to finish this article. Of course, if the outline you create is different from what I thought, there is no need to modify the outline because of my words. In short, if you write the article "carefully", you will have a clear conscience, and it will be a good article. Above.

I read 13 chapters in one go. I don't want to say anything else. Regarding the writing style, description, psychology, etc., These are all things that adults have said. I just want to say one thing, you have written what you want to express. The characters are not the most important thing, and the male protagonist can be ignored. Nowadays, it is no longer popular to be a savage man who has money and talent. However, music is the most important thing. I have always believed that music can reflect people's inner feelings. What you are thinking, what you want, what you plan to do... These can all be reflected in music. However, the article does not describe the feelings of music enough, which makes people feel inexplicable. In addition, in the competition, skills and emotions are scored separately, and there will definitely not be people who are emotional but have poor skills to a certain extent. Yunxi is a very innocent child, so innocent that when he saw non-human creatures in the first chapter, he was not surprised or screamed, and he was able to live together later. Laugh. But I don't really like the two male protagonists... Anthracene, or maybe three of them. Senior Brother Bai gives people a pretentious feeling. Why he suddenly fell in love with the heroine when they first met is not explained clearly. The relationship happened suddenly. At the same time, he did not appear in the following chapters, which made him feel that he had no sense of existence. His influence on the campus was also exaggerated, giving people an unreal feeling. The second one, Shu Wei, is the only character whose personality can be clearly seen, but he is Xiao An's least favorite arrogant man, Tears. As for the third one, Lord Elf, he has not been described in depth yet, so he is basically in a state of confusion. What Xiao C wants to express in this article may be the impact of music on people, or it may be mourning the death of music that truly touches people's hearts. Maybe it's just a beautiful story about how simple dreams can come true. Anyway, please try your best. Author's reply: Pounce Thanks Brick I will go and revise the article About a certain Bai~~~~~~In fact, he has not fallen in love with Xiaoyun so far Pounce

Sofa! ~Comfortable! ~The cover is beautiful

Come take a photo! There shouldn't be many people taking pictures of large articles, right? Should I still take pictures? Am I not HD? Ha ha! No more nonsense! Shoot bricks! The description of the mood is very important. It can better portray the character's personality and prevent people from being indifferent to the character. What is very embarrassing is that I still have no impression of the heroine of Da Da. At most, I can only feel that she is an ordinary girl, uh, and she also likes Mr. Bai. When I started reading it, I was still waiting for a continuation of the mood description or the environment description, because it can increase the three-dimensional sense of the article instead of making it boring. But now that I have seen it, I haven't seen these descriptions yet. I am so tired. Okay, no more pictures. . . I didn't dare to take pictures anymore. . . Flash people~continue to take photos next time. Author's reply: Squat down to pick it up, turn around and crawl away