The Sound of Restraint: Moon Over the West River, Tales of Old Nanliang

Is there a lower part? ? ? ? ? Expect

The details of the branches are not explained clearly. I was a little confused at the beginning Even some dialogues are intermittent, disorganized, and difficult to understand. It's like a stroke of money coming from the sky, hanging sideways At the end, it seems like it's not really over?! If there is a second part, it should be able to fill in some gaps. The phoenix bathing in fire means that guy, The protagonist's personality is a bit gentle at first, like a virgin, and even a bit positive. Later, after accepting that I was separated, That character took a sudden turn Even the poor attitude towards that kind of national teacher is a thousand miles away The author should be more tactful when writing about emotional turning points, so that readers will not be unable to keep up. It's too impatient! Moreover, the emotional turbulence and lingering details are not bloody. The main purpose of the article is to write the plot, There is a lack of emotional excitement, and the details of the plot twist are a bit rough and rushed. All in all, it looks like a dish that lacks salt. Something missing is the essence of everything But, I like the personality of the main character design very much, Looking forward to the difference in the second part The extra story is written in a simple and straightforward way, and it's very cute. Actually, the extra episode I'm looking forward to more is the one between the protagonists. Something like cutting in the second person Or, use the perspective of another character (such as a general or Jialan) to cut into the first-person narration's own emotions for the protagonist. This can not only make up for the shortcomings of emotional narration, but also explain the details. Sometimes I care too much about whether the plot follows what I want But I lost my original soul, I was rushing too fast! A good story still needs good actors to bring out the real charm, right?! Wouldn't it be better if the author slowly wrote the article when he has feelings? Please forgive me if I exaggerate, thank you!

Good,, so fast,, I feel like biting someone,,

Ahhhh,, no H,, crash,,

I've been here before~~~~~~Come on~It's very well written~I will ask my relatives and friends to read it together~~

I was embarrassed... What was the final result of the protagonist... He jumped off a cliff and then what??

One night I made it clear that I had seen it before and finally confirmed

One night, I said that I had unfortunately forgotten to rate it just now.

One night I expressed my love...

How is the protagonist's kung fu now? Do you only know a few fists and kicks learned in modern times, or have you completely mastered Wuchen Kung Fu?