[Delicate beauty x proud young lord]
Jiang Xiuying had always known that she bore a striking resemblance to the famous Consort in the imperial palace.
It had nothing to do with her, until the day she married Zhong Yun, heir to the Prince of Li. He spent the entire night outside the palace for the sake of the Consort.
People mocked Jiang Xiuying. How could a beauty and the legitimate daughter of a marquis's household end up as nothing but a substitute?
Only after she came to her senses did she realize that she had mistaken Zhong Yun for the man she loved because she had hit her head.
Not long afterward, Jiang Xiuying asked Zhong Yun for a divorce.
He assumed she was just throwing a woman's tantrum and would come back to beg him in a few days.
He waited several days, growing more and more restless.
At last, the news he had been waiting for arrived: the young general who had supposedly died on the battlefield had returned.
Zhong Yun heard Jiang Xiuying say to the general, who had the same tear mole as him, "If I had known you were alive, I never would have married."
By chance, Zhong Yun learned that the person who had pulled him out of the mire years ago was not the Consort, but Jiang Xiuying.
He held her tightly, eyes red. "A Xiu, will you come home with me?" He would rather die than let her go again.
She stepped back, her voice cold and distant. "My lord, please show some respect."
P.S. Alternate setting, two substitute romances, both leads are virgins, and the hero must win back his wife.
Please add my upcoming story, My Beauty Is the Key to Winning Over the Tyrant.
Jiang Yining transmigrated into the body of a great beauty with nothing going for her but her looks.
She was very pleased with her new body and planned to coast through life.
The person she had to win over was a ruthless tyrant.
Unfortunately, this tyrant had principles and substance. Rumor had it he cared nothing for outward beauty and loved only beauty of the soul.
Jiang Yining: …
Luckily, before she transmigrated, she had been a scheming, top-performing green tea girl.
Jiang Yining did everything she could, showing off her talents and flaunting her intelligence at every opportunity. "Your Majesty, let me play three hundred melodies for you and recite three thousand poems."
She glanced up and saw the tyrant staring at her face and body. He hadn't listened to a word she said.
Jiang Yining: …
Theme: Have the courage to correct your mistakes and build a better life.
Falling in Love in an Infinite Game
The Villains' Beloved White Moonlight
The Big Villain in the Ex-Wife-Chasing Crematorium
Savoring the Rose
After the White Moonlight's Engagement
I Use My Beauty to Win Over the Tyrant
I Have a Crematorium [Infinite]
Obsession
After We Meet Again
Reborn, I Only Love Studying
Strong Liquor Down the Throat
Falling into the Sea of Stars
I can feel that the author's writing power is there. The early writing is delicate and the emotional line is well developed. The tension of the story and the characters are well established. But I don't know why. Was it that the conception of the story in the later period was not complete enough, or that the response did not meet expectations, which made the author seem to have a perfunctory attitude... The descriptions in the middle and later periods are much more casual, with long and elaborate third-perspective descriptions, the emotional line is not developed more delicately, the characters are also flattened, the plot logic is also very rough, and the ending is even more hasty. Alas, the author has a foundation, and I feel that he also has the aura to write stories. I hope he can give his work more patience and more time to polish it.
The dozens of free chapters are the best written, but the rest are too rushed.
Very dissatisfied with the ending
How could Zhou Yiheng like the fifth princess? That's ridiculous. I'd rather he didn't like the heroine that much than like the fifth princess.
I can feel that the author's writing skills are there, and the writing style and emotional lines in the early stage are also very good. I don't know why. Is it that the conception of the story in the later period is not complete enough, or the response is not as expected, which makes the author seem to be perfunctory... The description in the middle and later stages is much more casual, the emotional lines are not particularly delicately developed, and the ending is even more hasty. Alas, I have a foundation. I hope I can give myself more time to polish it.
Good looking! Ah Xiu and Ah Yun are so sweet!
Woohoo, I haven't seen enough of the extras!! Madam, you write so well
The first part is wonderfully written, but the second part is abrupt and rough, and the ending is unreasonable and hasty. What a pity!
He planned so hard for so many years and then gave the throne to the son of an enemy who killed his father, mother and grandfather. How holy is this operation?? How can we guarantee that when the little emperor grows up in two years, the emperor will be suspicious and kill them?
Hahaha, Liu was killed by the emperor, it's so real