Ascend to Immortality by Turning Away Suitors

What can I say about this article? The author probably likes the plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, but this article gave me the feeling that the protagonist has turned into a pig. I remember that around chapter 70, the protagonist has not yet established the foundation, and he only has the golden elixir when he is almost 100. And this article is only more than 100 chapters. The heroine's memory was tampered with in the early stage, and she was sealed and forced to sign an equal contract for three consecutive times. There is no reversal. The heroine did not notice the memory tampering and was sealed. I didn't notice it, because the male protagonist couldn't bear to change it. The female protagonist signed an equal contract and didn't notice it. The male protagonist wanted to do something several times, but external factors caused the plan to be ruined. It had nothing to do with the heroine. The author probably wanted to write about the heroine slowly growing from an ant, but the growth was too slow. The growth in both mentality and strength was very comical. It gave me a feeling of how long the heroine can continue to be so weak. Many people grow up like this. Slow protagonists are usually long novels. Although they are frustrated in the early stage, they have enough time to slap them in the face later. The length of this article is not enough, which makes it a bit refreshing. It does not make me feel that all the frustrations in the early stage are released in one breath. If the author wants to write a slap-in-the-face plot next time, remember to intersperse some growth. For example, the seal makes the protagonist practice faster, and the equal contract makes the protagonist's state of mind grow. After all, it is also in the reality of the novel. It's okay to have misfortunes happen one after another. In a novel, it would be uncomfortable if the main character was just to be frustrated. In fact, it would be better if the protagonist had some growth after being frustrated for the first time. As mentioned above, as a new author, DaDa is actually pretty good. However, if you feel that the worldview of cultivating immortals is too rounded and will not come back, you can write a smaller worldview to make the protagonist grow faster. I hope to see better novels from the author in the future.

Come on, come on⊙?⊙!

Is this almost over?

I feel like this male partner is so annoying. He has schemed against people so many times and still wants them to belong to you. If I don't chop him up.

Congratulations on the ending. When will the second part come out?

Press the paw, congratulations on the big completion!

After soliciting opinions, I will probably finish it with 10,000 words tonight or more tomorrow and the next two days. QAQ found out that Little Angels basically stopped watching it, so it didn't expand the plot, and concentrated on writing the second part of Shura Field. The slap in the face will be postponed to the second part...

Hehehe, I like this plot!

I seem to have forgotten to rate my last comment.

Emmmmm, did they know each other before?