My Partner Is Not to Be Trifled With (Transmigrate into a Book)

It feels like the author dug too many holes, but ended up not planting enough trees and the holes were wasted. But the writing is okay, at least I was able to read every chapter. However, the transformation of the relationship between the two protagonists from family affection to love is still not delicately portrayed.

You probably deviated from the outline from the first chapter.

It's very interesting, good luck to the author!

In my day, the author dug so many holes but didn't fill them, is he gone?

And the title of your copywriting introduction is not close to the content at all.

Come on(? ??_??)?

This review deals with the plot and may contain spoilers. I guess the author was in a hurry when he wrote this article, but if I had bought it while chasing it, I might not have bought the entire article. The story is a good one. Because there are few chapters, I read it very carefully. I only read it when I was sleeping. The previous part of childhood is very attractive. Personally, I think childhood is the best part of the novel. It is natural and smooth, and the emotional part is also handled relatively well. It's just that the transition is too fast, there are too many foreshadowings, and there are also many irrelevant people popping up. Let me analyze the main characters in detail, the Liu family and the Jiang family, the secondary characters Dahua and the two maids, and the other characters, the red-sleeved Huang family's little beggar Miss Zhou Lin Xunzhen. If the author mainly describes Liuzhuang Jiang, why write about some insignificant characters? Add word count? For example, Hong Xiu, what does the main plot have to do with her, except that she may be sent to Master Zhuang, and she is already engaged, so it has nothing to do with her. She appears several times in the article, and in the end the dealer failed and didn't give her a place to go. So why did she write so much about her earlier? It seems clueless. The life experience of the little beggar is also mysterious and has not been written clearly. It feels like she is a golden finger-like existence and does not need to be explained clearly. I think the plot content is okay, but the plot arrangement seems very abrupt, especially the emotional scenes. The two protagonists are childhood sweethearts. Before Qiao Niang realized that she liked Liu Ge, all their interactions did not create an ambiguous atmosphere. Even if they were possessive of each other and especially cherished the things the other party gave them, there was no element of liking involved. Perhaps the two grew up together and are too familiar with each other. It is also true that the awakening of Qiao Niang's feelings, including the plot of arranging for her to realize her feelings, seems to be a deliberate arrangement, which is what I call the plot abrupt. The article also omits a lot of details, and the transition is fast and unnatural. In fact, if you read it roughly, I don't think there is a problem, because I can read the subsequent chapters very quickly. But I'm sorry, I have obsessive-compulsive disorder, not to the author. I just think this novel is very malleable. If it could be made longer and more detailed, it would be better. I don't know if the author is a full-time writer, but I hope to see the author's progress.

Pretty and sweet. Personal opinion: The copywriting made me pass this article many times...

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What does it mean? Is Qiao Niang the daughter of the second young master of the Jiang family?