I keep thinking about the innocence of the past, and about that girl from back then. I haven't seen her in ages, and I wonder how she's doing. At last, I've stopped getting lost in online games. Maybe I'm just too bored! Now I've started looking back on the past again. I keep wanting to relive the happy times, but no matter how hard I push myself to try different online games, I can't find that old feeling anymore. So I've started thinking about writing something to remember the past. Maybe it really is worth looking back on!
Because I'm bored, I say boring things. 1 To be honest, I don't think there are any scenes in what you wrote. There are only character psychology and dialogue. This makes me unable to understand many people's relationships. I should add more scenes between the dialogues. Or you can directly write it as a scene on the Internet, just like the one written by Jock Angel. Have you read it?? 2. The story is still too cliche. Although it is your experience, if you can't innovate, don't just cling to the current relationship and add something special. It will only lead to a mouth-watering situation. 3 Oh, it's just talk. I advise you to read more other people's romance parts.
Hey, comrade, can you tell me who the little eyes are? I saw it and now I can't even pay it back.
It's very stupid, but it's okay
Ahem hello, extra points~!