Identity V: That Is His Star

Kritch Pearson is an utterly irredeemable villain!

His heart is pitch-black!

He's selfish, heartless, and full of wicked schemes. Double-crossing his allies is an everyday occurrence. He's a thug, a scoundrel, a hopeless parasite on society.

When disaster strikes, he's the first bird to fly off on its own.

And he's proud of it.

But when he saw his star, he found the last little bit of conscience he had left.

That was his star.

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