Not bad, but I feel like the feelings come too quickly
Okay~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~``
With cold warmth. Like
I promised to have flowers, but I accidentally ended up with water. Sorry~~I'll make up for it again~
I feel that the writing style is very immature, my ability to control the article is not very comfortable, and some plots feel very abrupt. Yes, as a friend downstairs said, it's still a little messy. Haha, but even so, I still finished reading the whole article without starting midway. A bouquet of flowers is presented~!
What a great article
The use of first person and third person is a bit confusing~~~~~~~~~`
The ending is also a bit rushed, but the flaws are not hidden, the writing is very good~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~``
I like the ending very much, Xiao and Xuesheng are also very suitable.
In fact, Xuesheng is also a very good choice. It's a pity that she is destined to be a supporting role as soon as she appears~!
I like men who are as gentle as jade and smart~!~
I finished brushing up a very old article. . . .
Not bad, but I feel like the feelings come too quickly
Okay~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~``
With cold warmth. Like
I promised to have flowers, but I accidentally ended up with water. Sorry~~I'll make up for it again~
I feel that the writing style is very immature, my ability to control the article is not very comfortable, and some plots feel very abrupt. Yes, as a friend downstairs said, it's still a little messy. Haha, but even so, I still finished reading the whole article without starting midway. A bouquet of flowers is presented~!
What a great article
The use of first person and third person is a bit confusing~~~~~~~~~` The ending is also a bit rushed, but the flaws are not hidden, the writing is very good~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~``
I like the ending very much, Xiao and Xuesheng are also very suitable.
In fact, Xuesheng is also a very good choice. It's a pity that she is destined to be a supporting role as soon as she appears~! I like men who are as gentle as jade and smart~!~