Clouds Yet to Gather, Ink Yet to Deepen

Sigh... Actually, it seems better written than BL novels, at least it flows more smoothly. Although the characters... Seem familiar... Compared to other novels of the same genre... In my opinion, there are too many inner monologues from the female lead, and those emotions... Perhaps it would be more appropriate to express them after specific events. The occasional suppression feels a bit strange... But it's not bad though~~~~ The narrative pace is very comfortable~~~~~ Keep it up~~

Where's the next part? Where's my next part?! You author, hurry up and have a baby!

I'm back again, haha! I don't know exactly how much you changed, so I read it again. +.+ Author's reply: I've made quite a few changes, and after all that revisions, I'm losing confidence. Sigh...

I believe in you! You're the best! I have high hopes for you!

Hehe, hurry up and write more! I can't wait to read on! (Author's reply:) I'll try to write two more chapters before I leave. *Fist pump* (Weakly): Although I know what I'm saying isn't very convincing... Squatting in the corner drawing circles...

Haha, this urban white-collar worker is amazing! I can't believe you wrote this!