The jianghu is treacherous, full of deceitful people, dangers at every turn, and mysteries that are hard to unravel. A fake legendary sword manual inadvertently gets his sister-in-law, his elder brother, and their unborn child killed. He only wants justice, but ends up uncovering the jianghu's darkest and most sinister secrets! He never meant to get involved in the jianghu, yet now he's deeply entangled in it... The heroine is a typical woman from an ancient inner chamber: neither affected nor naive. The male lead has no golden finger, and he and the heroine grow stronger together, step by step. Their romance is smooth sailing, while the jianghu is full of hardship. No love triangles. The romance is nuanced, and the story's pacing is carefully handled. Not a wish-fulfillment story. #Angst #Comeback #Revenge
Completed work: the lighthearted fantasy The Poor Daily Life of a Sword Cultivator. Please enjoy!
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For example, take this paragraph from Chapter 1: Zhihua rolled his eyes: This time he went south, to put it mildly, Li Zhihua was visiting his grandmother on behalf of his mother, but after all, it was not a blind date in disguise? Cultivate feelings? And what about the young cousin? Li Zhihua only remembered that when she was a child, when her cousin lived in the garden of Li Mansion, she would stare at him The snot bag was so frightened that he burst into tears and cried for his father and mother. Although Li Zhihua Although he was young, he could not avoid being taught a lesson by his mother, and Li Zhihua could not help but write down the snot bag again, which made him cry again. Can be changed to: The director rolled his eyes: This time he went south, it was better to say that he was visiting his grandmother on behalf of his mother, but after all, it was not a blind date in disguise? Cultivate feelings? And what about the young cousin? I just remember when I was a child, when my cousin lived in the garden of Li Mansion, she would burst into tears when she stared at the snot bag. She cried for father and mother. Even though she was young at that time, she could not avoid being taught a lesson by her mother. And being punished by this snot bag secretly made him burst into tears again.
I just finished reading the first chapter, and my first impression is that the writing is good and the writing is smooth! But there is a small suggestion. The heroine's name appears repeatedly a lot, almost once or even twice in every paragraph. You can use her instead. Personal opinion!
Wrong. If you eat sweets as a child, you will suffer hardship when you grow up (covering your cheeks)
Coming from Zhihu, the author's large copywriting and title are very attractive. The martial arts theme is such a cool environment and must be supported. As someone who has also written martial arts novels (none of which have been finished), I can fully understand the effort it takes the author to conceive of a martial arts novel. From the structure of the Jianghu story to the characters' grudges and sects' martial arts, every move must be carefully considered. The most important thing is to have antique writing style. I really admire the author for persisting in finishing the novel. Forgive me for not praising the novel against my will as it is extremely exciting and beautiful. But in my eyes, this is also a well-written work. The characters in the story are very convincing. I also feel sad about the final ending. I hope to see more works from the author in the future.
Except for the heroine, everyone else is really miserable~
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Author, what are you going to do? I have a vague feeling about it...
The drama has begun. Come and watch (???)
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Not bad, but the subject matter is a bit cool in JJ, and the content is okay