
Moonlight White
月白
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 206k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
55Chapters
123Favorites
95Nutrient gifts
717Clicks per chapter
81Comments
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After reading this article in the middle of the night, I felt very sad. I originally wanted to say it briefly, but ended up writing a long review. I really like the author's writing style, so I don't want to blame anything, I just want to say something. In my opinion, the author was limited by his distrust of love and his cowardice of not taking that step, so he ended up like this. After watching the so-called supplementary finale, I didn't feel any better, because the ending was very hasty, the change was too sudden, the characters were too OOC, and it basically had no effect. When I saw the ending of BE, I actually saw that the author had completely shattered the characters and beauty he had created. This shattering process was very frustrating. It was a process from hooking up to being passionately in love to conflict to the relationship fading to breaking up and then regretting but being unable to recover. In fact, in the whole process, as long as both parties made a little effort and change, the ending would be completely different. But no, every time one party tries to make some changes, the other party will inevitably retreat, or various situations will occur, such as a mobile phone falling into the water, a house being sold, a car accident... To be honest, I am disgusted with this kind of forced BE from the bottom of my heart. Just like a bridge that you built well, suddenly collapsed irreversibly without warning. The people on that bridge could have avoided all this as long as they worked hard to make up for it and made some changes, but they didn't even dare to take such a simple step, or were unwilling. They would rather let the bridge collapse completely, because they believe that even if it does not collapse now, the bridge will collapse sooner or later, so why should I bother to save it? It's impossible, then just ignore it and let it collapse. In fact, the people on the bridge who think this way are either depressed or don't love enough. Otherwise, why not take some risks, believe in yourself and the other person, and take the step of change? At the beginning, I saw trust and firmness in the novel, so this was the most uncomfortable part for me. Because conflicts come too easily, relationships become too quick and too easy. This made me feel that all the affection before was not worth it, it was like a show, and no one made any effort to save this scene. It's not like this, it shouldn't be like this, it's not the end of the road, it's not a thorough love, it's not a little bit of effort for this love that seems to be unforgettable, is it going to end? Moreover, the last one-third of the story is all about the various misses and withdrawals between the two people. This endless hope gives people hope and is completely broken, until watching it irrevocably move towards decline and bleak process, I was so frustrated that I couldn't restrain myself, and the final reversal of the ending was unconvincing. Life is already so difficult. We know that some things will fade away, and some things may never come. Loneliness is the fate of human beings, because no one in this world can completely understand you and trust you. No one will give and love unconditionally for no reason. However, life is already so difficult, so don't make it more difficult. There should always be some things that you need to believe in and pursue. There are some things that we should take out and show to others, without tearing them bloody, but still showing some sincerity; we should poke out a small tentacle from the hard shell and touch it with people. The sparks that burst out at the moment of touching make people obsessed, but exposing the soft belly and basking in the sun together is the happiness that life should have. If you always retreat into your own fortress because you are afraid of the uncertain future and the inevitable bleakness of love, then such a person is probably not worth loving. Cen Sen is probably not worthy of love, and Cen Sen doesn't quite understand what love is. There are thousands of kinds of love in this world. Even family affection will fade due to conflicts and frictions, but everyone who is lonely must not become an isolated island. We must have easy access to others, because we need to find and affirm ourselves in communication with others. If you step into a situation of eternal loneliness and distrust, it must be a vicious circle. You can't find a way out after going around in circles, just like Li Yuebai and Cen Sen can't find a way out. In other words, the author can't find a way out for them, and they can only inevitably decline. But there is a way out, and it's right there. It just depends on whether you are willing to take a second look, take some risks, walk around with a heart that is easily broken, and try to find it. I cried uncontrollably in the middle of the night, and the depression in my heart has been relieved to a certain extent these days. I am very grateful to the author for letting me examine myself and my heart.
At the end of the last chapter, I saw Cen Sen's eyes were red. I thought there was some story a few years ago... Turns out there wasn't one_(:з∠)_
I'll mess with it! I looked through the comments and it seems that there is abuse_(:з∠)_I'm good at it
Very good and big ~ I really wrote it
Yuebai looks so cute every time she says "fuck" (//?//)
I think the male counterpart is miserable.
Attack each other! I like!
It's very well written... But I don't know why I don't dare to read on...
To be honest, this ending is better than just stopping at the previous one. Forcibly eating sweets doesn't taste good either.
Fortunately, it gave a good ending, otherwise I would have cursed (^O^)