[Su Jin Fanfiction] A Lifetime of Plain Elegance

Marrying Baizhen, I'm really not afraid that the Sujin clan's coffin board won't be able to hold her down. True love makes you forget that Xuannv and Bai Qian were the main culprits who killed the entire Sujin clan. Oh, no. You have traveled through time, and other people's hatred has nothing to do with you. You and Bai really love each other, how can you give up for the hatred of others.

What the hell are these chapters where Ji Sheng appears? What about IQ? What about logic? What about the plot? It's like pretending to be a family wine in kindergarten. I don't feel very moved. I just feel that there is something wrong with Su Jin... A strong Mary Sue silly sweet taste.

When I was writing Small World, it was so bloody and I felt like I didn't handle it well.

Every time I see laughter like a silver bell, I think of laughter like a barbell

This direction is also a bit inexplicable. Was it Su Jin's fault that he died in Su Jin's arms? How unreasonable! Damn, maybe your description is not detailed enough. I don't think the heroine and Ji Sheng find anything touching? And Ji Sheng is not really dead, so is the heroine so grandiose? Are you still lying?!

Regardless of the original work, it is still good, but if you read the original work first, you may feel that the author has removed the CP. But I still like it myself, so I'll cheer you up.

????? What about logic?

On the surface, the backend is a bit childish, and some of the characters are also a bit broken. Another uncomfortable thing is what the hell is this Ji Qiao, I don't like it. The butterfly fell out of Dijun and Xiaojiu's Three Lives, Three Lives, and it's uncomfortable. Also, Su Jin's emotional intelligence is a bit low, and I feel sorry for Bai Zhen.

The story is very good, but I need to work harder on the writing!

Nice! The author is great!!!