Lin Yi transmigrates into a book as its villainous female supporting character. To stay alive, she clings tightly to the male lead.
Don't worry, male lead. I'll have your back from now on. No one can bully you.
Who's bullying you?
Me? I've already turned over a new leaf.
My eldest brother? I'll make him come apologize to you right away.
My second brother? Come on, let's beat him up!
A fun, lighthearted story. No genius-level characters, no conspiracy theories, and no face-slapping.
A fun, lighthearted story. No genius-level characters, no conspiracy theories, and no face-slapping.
A fun, lighthearted story. No genius-level characters, no conspiracy theories, and no face-slapping.
Theme:
There is a sense of déjà vu like Lu Xiaokui cheering
Every woman wants a husband like this
The heroine can't win a fight with a kid, whose IQ is only 80
It seems that the eldest brother is going out to conquer the world.
I have only read Chapter V of this article and have not finished reading it. I think maybe the details are always weird to me. But I really like the theme and plot set by the author, and I feel there is a lot of room for improvement, so I would like to give the author some personal suggestions. First of all, before writing an ancient novel, you need to understand some ancient culture and rules and regulations. For example, there are other rules for concubines. For example, wealthy families have strict restrictions on women, and it is impossible for women to leave the house at twelve o'clock in the evening (although the heroine just talks casually, she really wants to deceive her opponent, but her opponent is also a young lady from a wealthy family, so this should not be true). The second is to decide on the main characters before writing, and always keep it in mind when writing the article, and don't go off track. For example, before the heroine wore the book, she was portrayed as someone who looked like a high school student, but after wearing the book, why did she really look like a child when she met her classmates? The above only represents my personal views. I look forward to seeing the author's next ancient saying ~ Come on ~
It's 12 to 1 o'clock in the evening, and a young lady who doesn't know how to use martial arts asks someone to go out for a fight in the middle of the night?!
How come the heroine's character is really like that of a child? Isn't she mentally an adult? Is she still interested in going to the 38th line and complaining to the teacher?
The author of "She San" has written "she" wrong several times, so it should be next to a single person.
Big brother wants to be a heroine? Isn't it meant to be funny? Author, you are laughing to death
How could the heroine's posture of holding her thigh be so awkward? . .