A Beauty Who Captivates the City

The ending is not bad, but I prefer Fang Wan as a girl. Smart and quick-witted, he stirs up troubles and can hold a bigger world than the backyard and children in his heart. With his own talents and opportunities, he becomes a chess player like a man. At the end of the day, her edge was gone, her beauty was gone, and what happened in the outside world was no longer clear. The sharp and neither humble nor arrogant person she used to be in front of Xiao Zhong when she was not married turned into a little woman acting coquettishly and coquettishly, living only on the one-third of an acre of land in front of her... Maybe this is the life she wants, I don't understand. (With all due respect, although it is a romance novel, there is always a feeling that the male protagonist will cheat. After all, people have become fatter, and the situation cannot keep up. If you still think about relying on men, you will only have nothing to say in the long run)

(Previously rated 2 points) emmmm It's finally time for vacation so I can write a long review, but I don't know if the word count is enough. Most of the beginning of this article has a familiar feel to me, but the ending is so strange... To be honest, it's a bit bland and feels like a bad ending. But I can understand it, because the thrilling ending is not easy to write. I have read all the novels written by Dazhao. Some of them are excellent and some are a little dull and rushed. I always feel that Rebirth of the Pearl and Oriole Yuji are about the peak. Later, Ruyiyuan Ye Diqingmei is also very good, but I always feel that it is not enough, and Beauty Still Remembers is relatively bland and boring (personal feeling). When I first read this article, I was very surprised, because the character of the heroine is really great, and it made me feel excited (?). Especially since it looked gentle and pleasant on the outside but was really cute on the inside as a little devil (maybe my preferences were not quite right). I thought at the time that this story might be a new peak, but when I looked at it, I felt something was not right. So I was not particularly surprised by the ending, but I was still disappointed. Let me talk a little bit about the shortcomings of this article (not necessarily just this article)?_>`I hope you won't be angry. 1. First of all, the heroine. Originally, the heroines of Shichihexiang are very lovable and smart. This is very important. The reason why Shichihexiang's novel attracts me is that the heroine is more than a little stronger than other halo heroines of Mary Sue Goldfinger's brainless novels. Take a look at them all together. The powerful pearl has the strength of a merchant girl, the seven-orificed fawn is very smart and cute, and Xie Wanwan has the dignity and arrogance of Princess Jiangyang. I think these three images are very good, but when it comes to Han Yuandie, they are a little dull. I feel that the character design of Ruyi is based on the characters of the first four heroines. The appearance of Mingzhu, the exquisiteness of Xiaolu, the actual identity of the princess, and the name of Lucky Star, so I am always a little confused when watching Ruyi Yuan... As of this article, Fang Wan, a heroine who has the experience of being a vixen, a concubine, and a vicious concubine, was originally very brilliant, but in the later stages of Fang Wan, she was like the "Seven Harmonies" "Fragrant heroine" feeling, gentle, considerate, dignified, smart, with a view of the overall situation, and a little clever and lively (big heroines are probably like this, she instantly disappears from everyone (woo woo woo, I want to see the vixen Awan)... In fact, it doesn't matter if the heroine is a little dark, it doesn't matter if she is appropriately white, or she has other small flaws but don't be too annoying (suggestion!! Just a suggestion!!) 2. As for the male protagonist, the first three male protagonists are more literary, and the last three male protagonists are more martial. When I watched Mingzhu, I had no feelings for Chen Yi'an, but when I watched Orioles, I felt that Chen Yi'an's character was actually very interesting (?), And then Xiao Hongcheng didn't show much interest (but Xiao Hongqing was very interesting)... But it's actually very good, after all, it is a heroine romance. But there are always some similarities in the characters between the male protagonists, and there is a feeling that they can't escape that framework. There are similarities between Chen Yi'an, Xiao Hongcheng and Ye Shaojun. The round male protagonist (I'm sorry I forgot his name) is the first male protagonist to join the martial arts, but his character is the same as the previous one + a little bit improved, not to mention the overlapping characters of Chu Changshou and Xiao Chong in the back. In fact, you can try male protagonists like Xiao Hongqing (contrast and cute), Shen Datong (frivolous), and Xiao Qi (silly and stupid) (recommendation!! Just a suggestion!!). I like Chen Yi'an and Ye Shaojun better because they have more personalities. 3. Plot. It is actually a common problem among most authors that the protagonists have similar personalities. I usually read the author first before reading the article, so I have a deep understanding of it. At this time, the plot must not be repeated. Other authors will write about different themes, but DaDa only writes ancient words, which is more troublesome. Currently, DaDa writes about royal marquises more often, and DaDa has very heavy names. I already know some of his preferences (the eldest and second princes always become villains, preferring the third prince, and the fourth prince has no sense of existence. The fifth prince always has a bad status. The emperor is not fatuous, has a kind surface, prefers the protagonist, and has a strong sense of presence, Commander Shen). So when I saw the brief description of the princes, my heart skipped a beat. It was such a familiar configuration, and the fight for the heirs was probably not interesting, and I was always worried that the author would not be able to come up with a new story about palace battles... In fact, it is also possible to change the perspective, a bit of a commoner, a bit of a martial artist, a bit of a magician (suggestion!! Just a suggestion!!) 4. Word count. The structure of the novels written in big letters is relatively large, with more characters and more complicated relationships. It feels like a dream of Red Mansions, which is what I like. Novels are about other people's lives, and you need to be able to see a world from them, especially long novels, which have their own background and social order. The richer and more complex the world is, the more real and life-like the world is. Instead of looking at it at a glance, there is only a monotonous plane. Looking back, you can't see anything, not the sky, not the water. After building such a big world, you shouldn't keep it simple just to limit the number of words, otherwise it will feel unfinished, top-heavy, and make readers feel that their expectations are in vain. #That's all I thought of for the moment... After I finished writing, I suddenly felt that I didn't write it well. It seemed that there were many places that I didn't think thoroughly... But I've written it all, so I might as well post it... It's May now, waiting for the new article QAQ

There has been a literary shortage for a long time recently, and I suddenly discovered that many authors who have been in Jinjiang for twelve years have disappeared from this webpage. Now it's interesting to think about the stories that ended abruptly. I found Dada's Weibo, and I'm not embarrassed to rush to write new articles. I just hope that Dada has plans to publish new articles in the near future. Some of the articles on the list are really hard to read.

It's such a warm day, Wanwan finally lives what she wants

Ha

You may not believe it, but if the author doesn't help Fourth Master Fang lose weight, she will already weigh 200 pounds in my mind...

Xiao Chong must miss the emperor very much, touch

I like it very much, but I'm not allowed to give it five stars.

The ending was too hasty, and many people didn't explain it clearly.

It ended too hastily, it was unfinished