[Crossover] Goddess Case Files

I feel that the writing style and ideas are great, and the article is not fluent. Especially some of the views on gods and ghosts or Japan are very in-depth and convincing, but the main line of the plot is really difficult to understand! As I read the article, I felt more and more uncomfortable, and the more I thought the heroine could break free, but unfortunately she didn't in the end. In fact, I was really angry with the heroine. I felt that she had a lot of power but didn't use it, and she compromised so easily. How can I put it, I was very disappointed with the character of the heroine at the end. But overall, it's a very good article. I read it in one sitting. The combination of comics and comics is very reasonable and seamless, and the writing is really smooth, but ahhhh! I'm really still not reconciled! I feel that Candlestick's sincerity cannot be vindicated, and he is completely promoting Amaterasu. It is really different to say something like this late and early. Alas, I really hate Gao Tianyuan. To be honest, when facing the gods who are blocking the way, if it were me, I would just take advantage of the situation and destroy Gao Tianyuan with my sword. I can only say that the personalities are really different. I am still more inclined to be strong and decisive.

To be honest, the more I look at the back, the worse I feel. I have a particularly aggrieved feeling. As a Chinese, I have an inexplicable feeling of looking down on the joke-like gods of foreign countries, especially the so-called Takamagahara in Japan. In contrast to my own country's mythology system, I feel that they are tainted. This word, said to be gods, is actually similar to monsters. The weaker ones. When I read articles on the same theme before, I was thinking that if our cultivation system was substituted, the golden elixir stage alone could go sideways in the Japanese mythology system, and the Nascent Soul Transformation God could directly compete with Amaterasu.

I always feel like I have a lump in my throat, and I still can't calm down.

When I saw the end of this article and read the entire content, to be honest, I wanted to curse something, but I felt it was unnecessary. The best portrayal in this article is Atobe. Although he has been confused, he is firmly on the path he wants to take. From this point on, the character's personality is not OOC (except for the beginning of the emotional line because the heroine's aura is a bit inexplicable, which is the same as Sesshomaru's emotional line) In other words, the heroine of this article did not really make me identify with her as the protagonist, and the labels attached to her were just the words the author used to emphasize her. Instead, her own actions and thoughts were more reflected in the uncertainty, leaving the reader confused. In addition, what makes people feel the most sincere is the pursuit of victory as a chess player. Unfortunately, this part accounts for a small proportion. It can be seen that the author wants to explore something from multiple perspectives such as humans, gods, monsters, etc., And also mixes elements such as fate and human heart. However, due to the world view, it is simply not good enough. He can only write some stories at a shallow level, saying that human hearts are complex, non-human things cannot be formed, fate is unbreakable, and the protagonist is drifting with the flow. If you really want to make something so abstract and high-level, it is better to establish a theme, whether it is a clear resistance or a roundabout operation. Even if you really can only go downstream, you can also watch the protagonist's active growth in the ups and downs, instead of just passively escaping and pushing step by step. [Highly recommend "[Comprehensive] Dog God", which is very well written on the combination of gods, fate, monsters and other elements] So if you're not sure, just write a Su Shuang article or a love cookie, and the final ending won't be so weird that it sticks in your throat.

Very good~ Keep up the good work

It is not easy for the author to write an article, but it is not about what happened in reality, so he wrote the ending of the newspaper office. I was in a good mood today, but after reading the ending, I became very depressed. I was really unhappy.

I like the character of the heroine. The writing is very good. I like it.

The article is very good, please keep writing. How about writing a Yinying fanfic?

Hello book fans, I am conducting a survey. How many children did the hero and heroine in this novel have in total? What are the genders? For example, "I gave birth to three children in total, one was a boy and a girl, and the other was a girl." Your answers are very important, thank you~

? ? ? I bought this chapter early in the morning and wanted to read a few more chapters together. But today I saw the title of the book in the final text! ! ! ? ? ? Forget it, belated ending.