Stop Pretending, You Definitely Like Me

Support me, even if you don't write the end of these chapters, I still think you are a good author.

When will the author publish a new article?

What about the sweetness you promised? (T▽T)It's so cruel

The latter part is a bit ridiculous, but I still like it very much. I can feel the relationship between the protagonists. The author is very attentive.

I have followed this article from the first chapter to the present, and I have so many words to say that I don't know where to start. . . In fact, this is a very good subject matter, and it may not necessarily only be about sweet campus love, but what follows is really so bloody that there is no sense of empathy at all. It's okay to be more imaginative, and it's okay to have a slightly out-of-order storyline, but the logic of the characters' actions must at least be in line with their personalities. I suggest that there be less inner monologues and leave space for character interaction, so that task interactions can bring out the character's personality. Would this make the article more layered and give readers a more sense of involvement? Maybe it's because I, as a reader, don't like this straightforward and streamlined narrative style, or maybe I'm ignorant and feel that such large and complex inner monologues of characters only appear in romance novels before 2010. In short, the description technique is a bit outdated. Also, the portrayal of the characters is too flat, including the protagonists. Although many details can be ignored, in general, the characters should not be stupid for the sake of being stupid, or bad for the sake of being stupid! Everyone needs a set of logic to support their actions! Like the Jiang family and the Tang family, they are both good enough and bad enough. Although the author is very careful to explain the reasons why the two families did these things, it is not enough to support the logic behind what they did! Why torture underage children when there is a better solution? This is not something adults would do if they put interests first and get the best value for money. On the contrary, it looks like adults in the minds of a few middle and high school students who are having a little fight. Of course, this article is not without merit. Perhaps because of the length, the author focused on the interaction and love description between the attacker and the enemy, leaving no extra space to explain the complete logic of the actions of the supporting characters. After all, this is a pure love article, focusing on the love between the attacker and the enemy. However, I still hope that in the next article, the clown will no longer be bad for the sake of being evil, and be embarrassed. I hope that the characters can be richer and more three-dimensional~ The fact that I can follow it till now shows that I don't dislike this article at all. I just hope that the author will pay attention to not having OOC characters in future articles, or explain it in advance~

Finished? It's a bit rushed, is there any extra?

It feels like everyone is broken...

It's strange that it's obviously updated at 2 a. M., Why do I have to wait until after 9 a. M. To see it?

Still first! I really want to see the finale of he! It may be your first time to write an article, and it's also my first time to finish a book on Jinjiang. Haha, I believe you will get better and better as you write, come on!

Jiang Ao is really self-righteous.