A Laid-Back Crown Princess (Reborn)

This article collapsed, what a pity. The paragraph narration is still good, and the multi-line character description is also okay. The final part, wouldn't it be nice to stay in this life? It's really... I found a cockroach when I ate all the dishes.

I like it, keep up the good work??

It's not bad. The front part is pretty good, but the back part may be a bit abstract, but it's okay, I can understand it, and the ending is okay. There are just some things, some foreshadowings that should be rounded out, and I feel like I could add a little more about Gu Xiangyi. I saw what I said in the previous article. It may be that criticism from readers affected the direction of the outline. However, everyone has their own ideas. You should not change the outline if you are affected. After all, it is easy to deviate from the original intention. The ending will be a mess, and the next one will be better.

Based on my personal opinion, I can roughly guess what the plot is going on? First of all, the Pearl should be reborn in space, but the dimension of rebirth is different, equivalent to parallel space? Let us say that the Pearl was originally in Space A and was reborn in Space B. The Pearl in Space B changed some things, including the fate of Xu's adoptive father, and then indirectly affected Space A. So when the heroine wakes up a year later, that is, she travels back in time, it becomes like this? Really, I can only think of the explanation of parallel space to smooth out this somewhat confusing plot. In terms of narrative, the author should strengthen it a little bit, big time.

Well. The plot feels a bit confusing, but the characters are all quite distinctive.

It's really quite confusing. .

The end came too fast, like a tornado. . . . The latter part makes me a little confused, so is it rebirth or not?

I like it, hahahaha. I never value new works. Damn, I will follow your works from now on.

It's a pity that the beginning and copywriting are anticlimactic. The extras make up for it a bit. I feel like it should be a very good outline. In the end, I can only say that it has nothing to do with money, but I regret buying it.

The ending is Spreading Flowers, such a sweet book! There is no excessive feminism advocating freedom, nothing forcing the male protagonist to bow his head. It is great that the two of them can live a peaceful life. Although I don't know where the previous outline went, I am very satisfied now. Although I feel that the line about the time-traveling girl is not explained clearly, I like the emotional drama, even more than the book about the concubine hhhhhh