Long Live My Wife [Reborn]

Only two sides! Wuwuwuwuwu (occupying the building)

The writing style is good, but I feel that I can't connect it to the previous one. The feeling of being reborn is indescribable. It's like a short essay. Why didn't I write about the rebirth? The story is well conceived, but the description is terrible. There is one chapter that I can't believe my eyes. There are only three chapters. In addition to the story, many details are not well written. I started the article in a hurry and finished it in a hurry.

I would like to ask in a low voice, does the author still write articles? I found that the latest updates were a long time ago.

Supplementary points. I just saw such a good article. I was crying at three o'clock in the morning.

If you don't make a sound, that's all. If you make a blockbuster, that's my deep love for you.

In fact, when I read that the Six Mortal Taoist priests were about to appear in the article, it somehow reminded me of those Qingming novels about ghosts and monsters. The character configuration and writing style of the article have an ancient charm to it. A flower demon, a merchant family, and a Taoist priest. But after reading this article, I had second thoughts. The two attributes of same-sex marriage and rebirth are unlikely to appear in ancient supernatural novels, but if it were really written according to ancient supernatural novels, it would feel like this story would no longer be he. I feel that the author's writing style, dramatic conflicts, and plot tension are really well written. What impressed me most was probably the chapters about shoveling trees. On a rainy night, the servant outside the house was shoveling a tree, and a Taoist priest who seemed to be smiling but not smiling was standing next to him. In a room, the heroine was arguing with her mother. In another room, there were flower petals scattered on the bed, and a very beautiful "person" was lying on the bed, and a demon stood beside the bed. Stopping shoveling the tree on a rainy night, her mother's struggle, and the final separation of life and death, this is the story line of the heroine. But at the same time, it also makes readers feel particularly nervous about the fate of the protagonist in the article and its future development. In fact, I have said so many impressive things and advantages. Going back to the beginning, I said that it felt a bit like the supernatural novels of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. I personally think that the twists and turns in the plot later are a bit like the ancient supernatural novels, and the story line is a bit thin. And the weak point, I feel, lies in the appearance of the Six Ordinary Taoist Master. I feel like maybe I didn't notice that there was some foreshadowing about his identity as a master and his appearance. The appearance of the master is a bit like an old man with a white beard falling from the sky and coming to save the world. In fact, if some preparations are made for the appearance of his master, this plot point and the appearance of the character master will be much more three-dimensional. But in general, the whole story has the same style, the writing is very good, and the short story of more than 100,000 words has great plot tension. But seriously, when I read this article, I read it with the feeling of wanting to read a sweet article. You might get tired of reading the sweet story alone. The whole story can be said to be very sweet, but the tension of the plot is still there, and I feel that I have to praise the author's writing style. It really reminds me a little bit of the feeling I had when I watched Lianxiangban. Of course, Lianxiangban is half ancient and half white, and the words in this article are only in vernacular, but from the protagonist to the story line and writing style, the style is consistent. The fit is up up. All in all, I was very impressed and look forward to the author's next book. Ps. When I was about to post this long review, I took a look at the comment area. In fact, to be honest, Liufan Taoist's whole intention is a bit sadistic, but he said from the beginning that he wanted to avenge his parents, what else do you want from me? [Start singing~] pps. I'm really happy to make up the word count like this!

I want to leave the world with a head full of snow! ! !

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, entering the bridal chamber!

Read it in one go and finish it with flowers

Congratulations on the completion, see you in the next book