Take a look at my new story, Too Beautiful for Your Own Good.
New story blurb: After spending years wandering far from home, Zhou Muzi still hadn't managed to become the person she wanted to be. One night, after drinking to drown her sorrows, she found herself in her first love's bed.
"Let's get back together," he said.
Warnings: 1. A very, very explicit bad ending, with absolutely no hope of survival. 2. The first-love boyfriend has a deceased white moonlight. 3. Not mutually exclusive firsts, so proceed with caution if that's a dealbreaker.
Story blurb: Chu Leiqing died on New Year's Eve at the age of twenty-four, then was reborn ten years in the past. Parents who favor sons over daughters? Why bother with them? A selfish older sister? They can leave each other in peace. Street stalls, stocks, real estate: the world ten years ago is full of opportunities, and Chu Leiqing will make her own legend here. As for the love she never experienced in her previous life? A little taste will be enough.
Reading Guide:
1. Pure wish fulfillment, all the way. The story has some logic, but it isn't particularly strong.
2. There is no male lead. The heroine will fall in love, marry, and have children, but she won't spend the rest of her life with anyone.
3. The author isn't good at history. The plot will generally follow historical developments, but things will change according to the author's wishes.
Theme:
When I saw that they were obviously siblings, but their names were Chu Chunmei, Chu Leiqing, and Chu Jiabao, I felt that the heroine's style of painting was so weird! It's better to be earthy.
??? Aren't they all dead?
Dafa, did you forget to write it down, or was it a supernatural incident? Hahaha
Actually, this kind of writing is pretty good, but the progress seems a bit fast.
The name is really awkward. Don't put Lucifer here? There is also the name of the heroine. The eldest sister who is most favored by the family is called Chunmei. She named a neglected girl Leiqing. It is too 21st century, and no parents would use "Tears" in their children's names. It is unlucky.
It's contradictory, but it's still beautiful
Traditional Chinese characters, so tiring to read
It was interesting before, but it's outrageous here. Don't you feel awkward writing it now? There is also a heroine who runs a business, with an average salary of more than 100 and more than 60 yuan, and the clothes can really be sold. Do you think it is as easy as now to bring thousands of clothes? I hope there will be some logic in the future
Here, there is a contradiction. As mentioned earlier, the heroine's parents asked her brother who owed a loan shark to kill her. The younger brother was also sentenced to death, and the ending was different from the previous article.
In 1990, the salary of C was only a lot of money. For county teachers, it was only a few dozen yuan, and for rural teachers, it was even less. Lending 100 yuan to students is a bit fake.