A woman with no experience in modern romance
returns to ancient times by a twist of fate.
When she meets the prince charming of her dreams,
she discovers he has one troublesome admirer after another.
He's an ancient man.
When he discovers that the friend he's grown so fond of is actually a woman disguised as a man,
of course he goes all out to pursue her.
But how can a gentle, mild-mannered man turn away all the ladies vying for his affection?
And how can he protect the woman he loves?
When she's tormented by his troublesome admirers until she can't take it anymore, all she can do is
run away and make him watch...
Premise:
What kind of nonsense is this? The guy gets away with it after just a few words? I despise the author. The woman deserves to be tortured!
I don't really like the idea of a reunion after several years; I always feel that time changes everything.
I totally agree with what the previous commenter said—it would be more interesting if the male lead genuinely regretted his actions and then showed some excitement when he saw his son. The male lead is so annoying!!! The whole article was quite good; it's clear the author put in a lot of effort. Keep up the good work and write more great articles! Ah... I forgot something. Could you please check if there are any mistakes in the names in the article?
I have some opinions to offer, please don't mind, it's just a friendly suggestion, let's learn from each other! The questions should primarily be in the form of dialogues, right? It seems this story is quite narrative, and what I'm a little unhappy about is that it wasn't angsty enough.
Well written, keep up the good work.
What's going on? Everything's locked, I can't see anything. Why put it in the "Done" section?
The first few chapters were alright, but the later ones were not good; the writing became increasingly rough. The female lead, as a modern woman, didn't give the impression of being real.
I think the female lead forgave the male lead too easily, and was far too lenient with her love rival!
The ending was explained too simply~~~ But I'll still give it my encouragement!
I don't really like this kind of thing, I haven't finished watching it yet. It's a bit of a mixed bag!