The Knockoff Wish Shop

Ah Xue's writing is really the kind of writing that is a bit exciting and frustrating, but you still want to read it. It's hard to calm down.

Alas, it's hard to calm down. I've already read three of Chasing Xiaoxue's books (Draw Me, Wish House, and Baicao). This one is just like Draw Me, even more messy than Draw Me. There are many lines and many pitfalls, and many of them have not been filled in. For example, the Hao family, junior brother, and Mo Xiu may have wanted us to follow Qiuqiu's perspective. This will give us a sense of reality, but it will also make readers crazy and want to rush to Xiaoxue's house. You have written so many pitfalls, but you should fill them in! The famous one with this writing technique is Fat Man (What's Behind the Bronze Door!). However, if there are too many holes and not filled in, it will ruin the reading experience. I hope Xiaoxue can grasp the degree well. Even if she doesn't fill in the holes carefully, she hopes that she can click on the ending of this hole in the following article so that readers can have an idea and feel much more comfortable? Xiaoxue also likes to write about how many girls watch the protagonist pretending to be cool from the sidelines. This kind of writing will indeed give readers a great sense of satisfaction. However, sometimes the character and the protagonist should be difficult to intersect according to logic, but they happen to intersect, which makes people feel a bit abrupt. Some supporting characters even subvert their behavior for the sake of this intersection, so maybe some readers in the comment area hate certain girls. Also, both the ending of "Picture Me" and this article are very sudden. The ending of this article is even more extreme than "Picture Me". I know that Qiuqiu's story is over, and my companionship with him can only end here. However, the ending is too sudden, and it does not make people feel a sense of sadness. Instead, it feels like Jinjiang has been beaten, and the plot has been suddenly cut, and part of it is missing. It is really uncomfortable. But! I have mentioned the above shortcomings. Except for the abrupt ending, Dada has made great changes and progress in the book Baicao. It can be seen that Dada has been working hard to write good novels. Although there are still a few pits in Baicao, they are not harmful. Unlike this book, when I was reading the article, I was scratching my head and thinking why the Hao family has not been solved yet? The young master of the Su family is like that. Why doesn't the junior brother come out? What action will Mo Xiu and Uncle Shan take against Mu Baiyi, the young master of the Su family? These are not like tomb-robbing pits, but more like bugs. This happens to me too. But although Baicao is there, it's really very few, and it's not obvious. The plot of using bystanders to experience the protagonist's pretense is also more reasonable. The characters of Jiang Gongzi, Wu Huanyan, Zhao Sha, Xiao Sha, Doctor, etc. (I forgot their specific names) are more interesting than those in the Wish Shop article, and the plot of them coming into contact with the protagonist and watching the protagonist's pretense is also arranged more reasonably. The ending hasn't been written yet, and I don't know how Baicao's ending will be written yet. Dada is really making progress, and I hope Dada's novels will get better and better. I'm really looking forward to it now. Baicao hasn't finished yet, and I'm already looking forward to the next one. I believe Dada's novels will get better and better.

I have finished reading this article. If this article was not a literary waste, I would definitely not have finished it. It is really obvious in the later period that the author's mentality and sense of responsibility have been fighting.

Sure enough, this book is really a good one written by Xiaoxue. At least, it ranks first for me. The be aesthetic of the ending, although there are many holes left unfilled, and the middle is also frustrating, but the ending is grand and closed, unlike so-and-so (pointing, pointing, bright moon, etc.), Not satisfying enough, but empty, like watching a drama, which fits Qiuqiu's character very well.

The endings of Qixue's novels are full of unexplainable and unclear feelings. I felt depressed for a long time after reading "Draw Me", and this one is even more confusing. I think the first part should be written with great enthusiasm, but the second part gives people the feeling that the author can't wait to get rid of this pitfall. Really sad

There are too many pitfalls! There are too many questions that keep people hanging. It's still painful to rewatch it for the second time. It's the same as not being finished (some people are crazy) The idea is very good, but the details are really hard to describe...

I like it very much, but compared to Yuan Yuan, Qiu Qiu is completely forgotten and empty. [Dog head][dog head]

I couldn't accept this ending during the first play, but I was relieved after the second play. Maybe it's because I really think the story in the story is very interesting…. However, many of the foreshadowings and pitfalls in the article really require readers to fill them in, which is the consistent style of Xiaoxue's writing.

Although it has been finished for a long time, I still come back to read this article from time to time, mainly because some of the mysterious details of Qiuqiu can inspire me to learn...

How can I put it... This ending has the illusion of being neither good nor bad. It feels reasonable to stop here and start a new life at will, but it also feels like it is not finished and the ending is stuck here. But this article is great! It would be more interesting if there were some extras similar to how those people view the problem of monsters (?) However, there is no extra chapter to stop here, which also gives people a feeling that this story has ended perfectly, and then it is the next story.