Xu Qinian: Shut up. I don't want to hear your self-introduction.
The System fell silent for a moment. "I gave your suggestion some serious thought, and I don't think it's okay. Hello, Qinian, I'm..."
Xu Qinian: All right, all right, you win. I'll say it for you. You're a system, and you're going to make me jump from world to world nonstop.
System: Hmm, the name System sounds much too official. I think a more approachable name could help improve this adversarial atmosphere between us... Um, hello, I'm XSWYAM System, and I'm going to make you jump from world to world nonstop.
Xu Qinian: ...For some reason, I feel like I've lost the courage to speak.
System: Then don't speak. Now let me, XSWYAM System, draw you an identity card. Wow, this identity is really sexy (pauses) and wicked.
--You were born handsome and kind, with a heart set on the sun, but somehow you never draw a good identity.
The section of progress 14.0 Is too long, it just looks a bit emm, I hope you can break it down into sections or something.