This novel has undergone a major revision. The next novel is Seven Stars Continue Your Life [Infinite]; blurb below.
Blurb:
After being reborn, Chen Bing has only six hours to prepare.
Drawing on the few days of experience she gained surviving the apocalypse, she gets her gear ready and latches onto a powerful ally, thinking she can save herself this time.
She never expected the apocalypse to be nothing like it was before!
Animals that shouldn't have mutated have mutated.
Abilities that shouldn't have appeared have evolved.
The difficulty has shot up by NN+ levels.
And she latched onto the wrong person, damn it.
What on earth has happened to this world?
Xiao Yi, who transmigrated back from ten years into the apocalypse, is determined to find his "Little Silly Pig," Chen Bing.
He never expected this scatterbrained woman to run off with someone else.
She even says she's found someone to rely on.
Xiao Yi, the strongest person in the Martial Realm: ?
Who dares to be her support? I'll move mountains for her, and my Little Silly Pig gets all the mountains of gold and silver.
On our long road to survive the apocalypse, we'll search together for the source of the world.
Reader's guide:
1. Fight monsters and level up, with mystery-solving and intrigue.
2. The male lead is a max-level powerhouse; the female lead grows stronger over time.
Theme: As long as you're alive, anything is possible.
Why is this door always open? It makes my back feel cold.
Is it considered Chen Bing's golden finger?
Stupid Bing Xiao Yi!! Start writing!!
It's not a good thing for zombies to evolve like humans. It's another hard battle.
Spread the flowers, I feel like the plot progress is a bit slow
Thank you Che Li for your appreciation and letting me write a long review b(￣▽￣)d In fact, the later development of the novel was very good. In the end, I was stuck on the plot point and lost my appetite. However, some problems were not dealt with in the early stage of the novel, which led to a high abandonment rate. The first is the issue of personality. The heroine is a nurturing Madonna, and the novel describes her character changes in great detail. In the later period, the heroine becomes bold and wise but still very kind, but it just doesn't feel very good in [the setting where the heroine lives in the apocalypse for a month before she is reborn]. The description of the amount of food in novels is often limited to "ten days of rations left". In the other twenty days, people will definitely do whatever it takes to get food, and without the help of the male protagonist at that time, the female protagonist will not have much advantage in competing for food. However, the heroine did not have much awareness of the dangers of food and human hearts in the early stage, and she seemed hopeless. Suggestion: shorten the time for the heroine to be reborn, one month is too long. Surviving in the wild for seven days can change a person to a great extent, let alone in the end of the world. Moreover, the female protagonist does not have the same sophisticated sense of survival as the male protagonist (it does not require that she is as skilled in martial arts as the male protagonist, but it should also show that the female protagonist is also accustomed to walking on a route that is easy to protect herself). The female protagonist is also not very courageous. In the case of the end of the world, when screaming will attract zombies, she seemed to be frightened and screamed twice. This is illogical, and it is impossible to live for a month before being reborn. Also, in Chapter 5, Li Chengbo's character appears OOC. He even abandoned his girlfriend in order to escape, so how could he help the male protagonist who was about to mutate? Moreover, the male protagonist was a stranger to him at the time, and he had no intention of releasing him from the beginning. Moreover, Li had just been forced back into the villa by zombies outside and killed his bodyguard. At that time, he should have been afraid of the male protagonist who was about to mutate. The plot arrangement of stepping in to help conflicts with the setting of Li betraying the male protagonist to Chutian later in the story. Suggestion: Modify Chapter 5 and write that the heroine will ask Li for help after the hero recovers. Second, there is the issue of atmosphere creation. This article is an apocalyptic novel, and the overall atmosphere of the novel should be tense and depressive. However, in the villa copy, in order to show the virtuousness of the heroine, it is very weird to deliberately write about the delicious-looking dishes that the heroine cooked, and in Chapter 13, she actually gave the cat some meat and rice! Logically speaking, in the last days, people should eat with restraint to avoid running out of food in the future. Pets such as cats and dogs should be used as food reserves. It is unscientific to waste food like this. In the Yan'er Island dungeon, because Luo Yafu is always jealous, the novel tends to be childish. At this time, the heroine has experienced a lot of things. She should not case NPCs like Ronaldinho at all. Being jealous about Ronaldinho makes the heroine look as childish as Ronaldinho. Suggestion: Delete the description of food, don't feed Xiao Lizi too much (→_→) and reduce the number of Ronaldinho's scenes. Third, there is a logic problem. As for the setting in the villa copy where the male protagonist was reluctant to agree to everyone flying a helicopter to escape, there was no specific reason why the male protagonist did this until the end. Even if the male protagonist realizes that someone is doing something behind his back, it will be over once and for all if he takes off in a helicopter, and what happens in the future will not affect him. Don't hide the reason in the text in a subtle way, as the reader may not notice it at all. Suggestion: Write the reasons why the male protagonist is unwilling to get on a helicopter directly in the text or write out the possible disadvantages that flying in a helicopter may bring. Fourth, the issue of supporting roles. It is obvious that Ye Qingyan wanted to write about her downfall in the future to achieve the pleasure of slapping the villain in the face, but Luo Yafu's positioning is relatively vague. Saying that he assisted her didn't make the heroine jealous, but saying that she was strong, the heroine's Tang Dao was slipped out of her hands. As the daughter of the supreme commander, she restored part of the factory's production capacity when Yan'er Island was destroyed just so that the hero's weapons could match hers. If we say this is to fit her silly persona, but it seems too childish in the context of the apocalypse. Suggestion: If she does not play a big role, then it is recommended to reduce her sense of presence. It is recommended that she truly shows her leadership skills or other advantages in her character in the paragraph later when the factory's production capacity is restored. Otherwise, it would be unwise for Tan Songnian to leave such an important part to her. There are no major problems in the plot of the novel, and the later development is exciting. I suggest you make some slight modifications in the early stage. As for the comments that some people make without thinking, just ignore them (●\'?\'●) The above is the content of the long review Amo
The lingering ghost of Ye Qingyan (→_→)
... Why didn't Chu Tian see the milk splashed on Chen Bing's face?
Silly Ice, Silly Ice, Silly Ice, is a nickname that only belongs to Xiao Yi, hehe
I want to see the female supporting character do a little better~ (after all, she is nozuonodie) I don't know why I just don't like her