The Isolated Island

Beautifully written, keep up the good work!

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Fear! Semir opened the door, and Lana's sleepwalking. Is Feiyu alive or dead? Why is it related to Semir again? I'm quite interested. Would it be better to change "What makes you get up so early?" To "What makes you get up so early?" "Don't be private like a fortune teller", it's "like". Author's reply: Thank you Taozi, my mistake has been corrected!

Quite touching, The Korean couple is waiting for the rescue team here. They have no fear and their feelings are deeper; Feisa didn't leave here because she was waiting for her sister to come back. At this moment, the little girl didn't have the fear she should have. In her heart, her sister is dependent on her and will never leave her. I hope they can reunite as sisters. Author's reply: Thank you. To be honest, I feel a little inferior now that I write this. Why are you the only one who always supports me? Thank you~~ I will keep writing, because I know that the biggest failure is to give up.

The author really put a lot of effort into the part about dividing houses, I felt dizzy just reading it. That last part is pretty scary. Author's reply: Not many typos lately! Hi hi~~ I corrected it!

Lots of typos. "Zhongzhe, can you promise me to see something?" It means "thing" There are greater times ahead for you as a man, "greater things" "Pete, I don't plan to go back.", "Plan". Can I change it if I have time? This time the author took a different direction in writing this article, and his style is a little different. Author's reply: Thank you Taozi, the error has been corrected. As for the difference, hehe~~ These differences are only temporary! You'll find out later! These are the foreshadowing.

Is it better to change "a bright look" to "a bright look"? "You can do it", does it mean "move"? I found that there are far fewer typos. Hehe, I still list the typos. Keep up the good work! Author's reply: Thanks for the criticism! The error has been corrected!

Come on, come on, come on~~~~The author's reply: Don't write content like this in the future, you will be deducted points! But thank you anyway!

There are also mistakes in punctuation~~Brother~The author replied: There is suspense in some places! Maybe the punctuation means different things!

The mysterious old man couldn't control his index finger, but he could control his arm. This is a very good measure. His tone of voice also had a special sense of humor. Author's reply: A special sense of humor, thank you for your review!