Traveling to Ancient Times to Retire

Not bad, but the consumption amount is a bit confusing.

The chase is over! Although it seems a bit too cliche along the way, it is still a good article.

Not bad? I hope I can write more good-looking articles

... My own love is so selfish, why do I feel that this sentence has the illusion of drama╭(°A°`)╮

Really, how does the emperor feel when he knows that his love rival's son marries his own daughter...

Why are you so angry... Gong didn't do anything wrong? And this mess was caused by his first love. If attacking was replaced by receiving, this general would probably be scolded to death for being such a scumbag.

This emperor is so disgusting! We should take advantage of the opportunity to usurp the throne and kill him.

Good-looking (づ ●─● )づ

Finished reading! Although very bland! But very warm! Come on big

First, finish scattering flowers! ! Next, let's talk about the text. To be honest, the writing style is a bit mediocre, sometimes it's like a running account, and there are a lot of unreasonable things, but I couldn't stand it and finished reading it! Ignoring some of the unreasonable aspects, it still feels inexplicably quite good-looking. You can watch it when you are bored and find it quite interesting. This is the first time I have written a complete story, and it is already great. From an objective point of view, the plot of the story is not draggy, but sometimes it is too rushed. I don't know how other people feel. After watching it, I felt that it was a little too rushed in some places, resulting in a lack of sense of involvement. Occasionally, it can be done once or twice, but I feel that I discovered it many times. For example, this morning I went to feed the chickens, then the ducks, and then the pigs. I went to have lunch at noon, and then what I did in the afternoon was mostly mentioned in one sentence. Most likely because I don't want people to feel bored, so I write it simply, but too simple daily routines can easily lead to looking like a running account. By the way, I forgot to mention it. Now I am wondering if I read a food article. I almost think I am a foodie. The most detailed description in the entire article seems to be about eating. Others just don't know if others feel it. I feel that everything I do is too easy. I don't know if it's because the pace is a bit rushed. Even after watching it, I felt that others agreed to Gong for no reason. Even after watching it, I thought about it and felt that Gong must have the aura of "being able to do anything". Secondly, I feel that the description of the character's personality is not very good. I don't talk about attack first, but talk about acceptance. He is a general, and I only talk about the article after he attacked the general's mansion. According to my understanding, it seems that he wanted to write that his life was not easy, the burden on his shoulders was heavy, and he loved to attack, but he had to be separated from him because of responsibility. But I felt that he was a bit strange after reading it. There is also Gong sometimes. If I were Gong and I lived through the apocalypse, no matter how I wanted to live a normal life, first of all, I would still be vigilant, but I didn't notice it. Not to mention superpowers, he may need some kind of media upgrade, but at least his force value must be enough. If it is not enough, he will push himself. Because he has lived in the apocalypse for so many years and has experienced a lot of hardships. Even if he changes to another place, he will subconsciously make himself stronger. When a person has experienced that he may die at any time, even if he changes to a very peaceful place, he will subconsciously make himself stronger. There will be that kind of insecurity in his heart. Of course, if he lives in a more "peaceful" end of the world, then I have nothing to say. And sometimes the attack is a bit weak. In my impression, it is like being without wind, and sometimes it becomes very powerful. When he was chopping firewood, I was surprised. I either didn't think he could chop firewood, or I was very surprised. In my impression, he is the kind of very weak. Maybe it's because it's too rushed, and there are some places where it's a bit too much? Okay~ The above are all personal opinions. Although I have never met or chatted with him, I feel from the book that he is quite nice. Don't look at me for picking out so many flaws, but if I continue writing, I'm not sure how many chapters I can read, but I will definitely read on. So no matter what others think, I can finish it and still want to read on. To me, it is a good book. Even if it has a lot of flaws, it's still a good story. And the progress is very obvious. The things I mentioned are actually the ones in the front, but less in the back. The overall feeling is much more natural than before, and the progress is huge. I feel that the most powerful people are not the ones who are great at the beginning, but the ones who keep improving. I look forward to reading the next book. Come on!