
[Violet Evergarden X SSSS.DYNAZENON/v02] Divine Miracle
[京紫x国家队/v02]神迹
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 21k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
5Chapters
590Favorites
9.0Score
110Nutrient gifts
6.1kClicks per chapter
71Comments
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Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart can't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the sentence "There are people outside the world, there is a sky outside the world". After reading the article, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No amount of gorgeous words can describe the brilliance of this article, so I just want to say: Your novel is so touching! Not as good as. … One more chapter? Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but it impresses readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This article shows extraordinary literary skills in its plainness. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart can't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the sentence "There are people outside the world, there is a sky outside the world". After reading the article, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No amount of gorgeous words can describe the brilliance of this article, so I just want to say: Your novel is so touching! Not as good as. … One more chapter?
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