I knew it. There are no such things as delicious, free, fancy lunches or pies falling from the sky.
One moment, the person who had just made a contract with me, solemnly calling me their Master and swearing to protect me, was there. The next, they had dumped me in the primordial age, where monsters and demons ran wild.
Are you kidding me?! I only just barely escaped with my life from the sirens off the coast of Florida! I haven't even had a chance to catch my breath, and now I'm supposed to watch all the monsters run amok here? No wonder that heartless unicorn wound up sealed away by a blood curse, despite being a divine beast~~~~~ Seriously, what the heck
And the vampire who's been protecting me all this time turns out to be some big shot in the vampire clan?!!!
My life is way too shocking!!! Even I, who can calmly accept that my dad isn't human, just want to pass out
Oh, my god! Even though I've never prayed to you sincerely, that's no reason to shock me like this, is it?!!!
"It shines brightly, like water halo-dyed, the transparent and ethereal blue, like the purest light blue crystal in the world, indifferent, indifferent, with a hint of cuteness and... Vague sadness..." I don't want to read it. LOLI is too windy and not my cup of tea.
What does "ash into angstroms" mean? Will the ashes turn into dust? Don't make up your own words, as this will cause reading difficulties. Use adjectives as accurately as possible, and use less or no words that may seem fancy but are actually meaningless or even offensive.
"He has a pair of icy blue eyes, icy blue, burning with a layer of faint glazed light, extremely bewitching. Black hair, overflowing with luster. White face, exquisite and perfect contours." Try to use it as little as possible and preferably not use this kind of LOLI-style description that makes people want to abandon the article.
If "the blood-stained sunset lavishly renders large swaths of the sky" is to pave the way for what follows, then it would be best to replace the "peace and harmony" in "everywhere is peaceful", and blood-stained and "peaceful" are not easy to put together.
"A new literary store called Fantasy Story House suddenly opened in the south of the city" appeared for the third time. Using ellipses when dividing can create ambiguity.
A little disorganized. If there is no natural transition, use dividing lines.
My sofa Hehe Let it all begin
Fantasy fantasy i like Update soon
Xiaomiao downstairs I'll take a look too I like this light feeling You can do it. Work hard.
Xixi~ What moved you? So stupid~~ HOHO~Write hard! Everyone must work hard!