What if Harry were a girl who happened to fall in love with Professor Snape? Unable to face his own feelings, the professor avoids Harry, while secretly protecting her. Harry finally realizes how much the professor has done for her. After much perseverance, the professor accepts his feelings for Harry. They get together, marry, and have children.
I think it would be better to revise it again. There are some parts in this chapter that are particularly embarrassing to read (that is, it feels like there is a missing piece or is inconsistent).
I feel that the first chapter is completely original... The unnecessary dividing lines can be removed, and the content can be written more, otherwise it will not retain readers... I will give you a point for Harry's sex change as a fan... I need to work harder to change it.
I still want to watch the follow-up!
I think it would be better to revise it again. There are some parts in this chapter that are particularly embarrassing to read (that is, it feels like there is a missing piece or is inconsistent).
I feel that the first chapter is completely original... The unnecessary dividing lines can be removed, and the content can be written more, otherwise it will not retain readers... I will give you a point for Harry's sex change as a fan... I need to work harder to change it.