What Do I Do When the Plot Falls Apart?

For your information (highlighted): Ongoing danmei novel (Journey to the West): Those Years I Spent in Journey to the West Upcoming historical danmei novel: I'm Just a Nobody Upcoming danmei novel: Raising Cubs in the Primordial World 1. This story makes no sense at all. The characterizations and plot have all gone off the rails. 2. All place names, medicine names, and job titles in this story are completely made up. 3. The author is sensitive and refuses to be ranked. Any attacks will be reflected right back. Han Yi was just one mission away from freedom, when he was forced to die alongside someone else. After choosing a new world, he ran into that "walking disaster" again. Little scene: Han Yi: "Stay away from me. The farther, the better!" Chu Wei quietly activates their blood pact: "Just say you want a hug. Why go and take a fall?" Han Yi feels a mouthful of blood lodged in his throat, unable to go up or down. This is the link to my author page. Come visit! Completed derivative work: Investiture of the Gods: I'm Daji's Older Brother Theme: To be added