Excerpt One:
Yi Yan: "Daddy, look. Why is it sticking up? It's swollen, too." He pointed at a certain part of himself, looking completely bewildered and confused.
Yi Zhou: "Rub it and it'll be fine, just like when Daddy rubs your arm. Keep rubbing it and it'll get better."
Yi Yan: "Why is it getting bigger the more I rub it?"
Yi Zhou: "That's because you haven't rubbed it enough. Just keep rubbing!"
Yi Yan took Yi Zhou's hand and placed it on the certain part, looking pitiful. "Daddy, help me. I don't think I'm rubbing it the right way."
Yi Zhou: "..." Rub it yourself!
Excerpt Two:
Yi Zhou threw his head back and roared, "You little beast, what are you doing? I'm your father, your real father!"
Yi Yan: "I'm just testing it." A hands-on test.
Yi Zhou: "Testing what?"
Yi Yan: "Testing how a dragon gives birth to a snake. Why don't you give birth to one for me while you're at it?"
Yi Zhou: "..." I'm a man!
Author: This is supposed to be a fluffy, uncomplicated story. I didn't want to write one, but somehow it really turned into one.
I couldn't remember the plot 5 years later, so I cried again. I can only say that if this article doesn't end well with BE, there is no point in forcing HE.
Am I the only one who burst into tears watching this? Please don't give up. I shed tons of tears
I didn't understand it until later. It was such a good outline and such good copywriting, but why did it fall apart at the end of writing? So sad, TAT
I thought the plot was very confusing. When I read the text, I thought it was a sweet story, but when I saw that it was about torture, I was curious about how to torture it, but it was really confusing. I was so confused that I didn't realize it was being abused. It seemed like I was writing a simplified version, but it wasn't a simplified version. I didn't know what I was writing.
Come on ^0^~