The second son of Minister Wang wants to buy her, while the third son wants to marry her.
Ji Xuan: Palace intrigue and household squabbles aren't my goal. My goal is to...
Wear fine furs, feast on delicacies, and build a golden house to keep a pretty boy!
The Emperor: You sell counterfeits, monopolize the market, collude with court officials, and throw the court into chaos.
You're a downright crooked merchant!
Male Lead: I just happen to like crooked merchants!
Ji Xuan: I'm not one! I'll prove it!
A business-building story, plot-driven, with a devoted one-on-one romance
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!
I just read the first three chapters, so I won't look for the advantages and will find a few bugs. First, let's start with the most basic words. Although there are very few typos in the large text, it is not without them. For example: "Pai passed" should be changed to "passed away". "Pai passed" is used to describe the passing of time, and "passed away" describes the death of a person; another example is: "Relegated mother" "It needs to be changed to "divine mother". "Relegated" has two meanings. One refers to the demotion and transfer of officials to other places in the feudal era. The other refers to condemnation and blame. Only the original meaning of "divine" refers to the head wife in slave society and feudal society. Second, the description is lacking. There are words in the article to describe the heroine's mother, such as "describing haggard" and "looking sad", but I'm sorry, I didn't see where she was haggard and where she was sad. You can describe her "witheredness" by describing her eyes as swollen as walnuts, lips chapped, etc. The so-called description is just like drawing. Write down the details clearly, and then use the details to tell what a person is like. Thirdly, it is a matter of logic. There is a description in the article that the heroine's family is living in poverty, right? Then please tell me where you got the money to hire a doctor for the heroine? Or the heroine's mother said it casually. In ancient times, when people couldn't even afford food, how could they go to the doctor every now and then? Is this really like an ancient Chinese puppet? Then there is the heroine herself. The heroine... Is eleven years old, right? At least she was only eleven years old when she was wearing it. Dad, can you still remember what you were doing when you were eleven? According to the normal age, she is in primary school at the age of six. She has not graduated from primary school yet at the age of eleven. Dear, she is still in the fifth grade. How much is fifty taels of silver equivalent to today? Baidu told me that one tael of silver is equivalent to two hundred yuan today. Are your relatives so nice that they can easily lend a fifth-grade elementary school student 10,000 yuan? Well, if you say that people in ancient times matured precociously, then there is nothing I can do about it. Also, the heroine's behavior in Chapter 3 can be called very impolite. She doesn't even respond with a courtesy, but just grabs the conversation. When the heroine had nothing to prove herself, her uncle made a bet with her like this??? I also want such a good uncle, really. So, sir, can you be more careful when writing articles? At the very least, you know what a person of whatever status is saying what you say, right? Do you need to understand the most basic etiquette?