You Just Have to Cling to Me

Wife~~~~~~`Woo~~`Why are you showing up like a bird~~ I miss you so much, cry~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Come on~~

Coco, I'm here to look for you~~Why did you disappear?

The road is slow, it's really hard to wait for Wenwen!

It's been more than ten days, why hasn't it been updated yet!?? Please, vacation is boring, please update quickly! I really like the adult's writing Kiss~~~! Come on~~!

I feel the same way as Mr. Jiang Luowen. The writing style has indeed improved, but there is not enough new ideas. But I still like Ji Haoning very much. Come on!

I feel the same way as Mr. Jiang Luowen. The writing style has indeed improved, but there is not enough new ideas. But I still like Ji Haoning very much. Come on!

Feel the same as below. The writing style is improved compared to Beautiful Man, but not new enough. But I still like Ji Haoning very much.

Dear Lutong, I'm sorry to have kept you waiting for so long, but what you've been waiting for is still a brick like this. I'm really sorry that I can only briefly comment on the structure and writing style. Please forgive me for not commenting on other things, because this is not a story I like, or in other words, I have seen too many such stories, the plot is already familiar, and the characters do not have the characteristics I like, so I have no way to comment, so as not to attract the rejection of your fans. First of all, the writing is relatively smooth, which is probably the biggest highlight I've seen. Regardless of the description or the dialogue, there is nothing obscure or difficult in most of them - but the wording and sentence selection still cannot escape the flavor of Hong Kong and Taiwan romance novels. With all due respect, this kind of writing is not only uncharacteristic in Jinjiang, but also has nothing worthy of praise even compared with similar novels on the market - in other words, it has basically no characteristics. Now let's talk about structure. The first part is quite clear, but when many characters appear later it becomes a little confusing, but other than that, there's nothing else. It's not that I don't want to give you a detailed review, it's just that apart from the plot and characters, I don't like this story, and there's really nothing to fault about the writing and structure. I think if you could change the plot to a more novel one, it might be a pretty good article. Newcomers will probably have to go through the process from imitation to creation. It's okay to learn other people's routines at the beginning, but they still need to have their own new ideas. What I hope to see is that even if it is a plain text like flycat that describes true and honest feelings, it is better than a sophisticated text that makes up a flashy story. This is my little opinion. I hope Lutong can continue to work hard and eventually write excellent works with personal characteristics. If you still want to know why I said I don't like this article, you can give me your email address and I will send it to you. If you think your story is good and you don't need to know the reasons for someone you don't like, then forget it. After all, everyone has their own preferences for radishes and cabbages, and there are probably many people who support this article, so there is no need for me to go out of my way to make you annoying - and you don't have to be depressed just because I don't like it. Jiang, I wish you all the best.

It took too long and I can't remember the content.

...8 Yes!!!!!! Xia Xia, you still have time to make up for the points when I update... So... Dear