Hard-Earned Survival in the Apocalypse

The heroine has been holding the neighbor's child, but she fell into the water. After the child was rescued, why not immediately rejoice at being rescued? By the time he came to his senses, the heroine was already cold. I really don't understand why she brought a neighbor's child with her. It's better to set up friends who grew up together.

What a waste of money. Speechless?

I feel like a lot of content is missing in the middle. As soon as I entered the base, there was a side story about having a grandson.

I basically didn't understand this extra episode... Who is Li Wen??? Has it left the factory before??? I am still a little disappointed with the ending of this novel. The author did not know whether to intentionally or unintentionally put forward a small foreshadowing in the early stage (or maybe I was overthinking it) and never mentioned it again in the later text. I feel that the writing is actually good, and the structure and completeness of the story need to be improved a little bit. This ending can be said to have ended abruptly, which made me suspect that it was anticlimactic... After all, there was no eunuch, and I personally liked it, so congratulations on the ending and a big fanfare~

In this situation, the heroine can still insist on taking the neighbor's child. If there is an earthquake or is thrown into the water, she will definitely run away when dealing with the relatives she spends day and night with. Moreover, it is too dangerous to take a struggling person in the water.

Not bad, just too little

It still looks good, but what about the romance? Where is the heroine? It ended suddenly

What you write is what I like to read You only write this little bit of everything What bad luck! I can't be like you in the future.

It's very well written, big~ but too short

There is no emotional line at all.