The Last Song in the Twilight Snow

Little devil, why are you here? Haha, isn't it bad?

Is this gone? Depressed. . .

Because it needs to be revised significantly, I would like to ask everyone to give me some opinions. It doesn't matter if you give me negative marks. At least let me know where I am lacking. Thank you. You

Hey, where is the comment I just made? Haha, I actually don't really want everyone to know, I just want to rely on luck and complain. If you have time, you can go. Author: Yingmeng Feixu This is a sister who helped me after seeing it on the forum like you. I told her a lot. You can check it out. It may be a bit sad. Haha, it seems that I am suitable for the sad type. My new pen name is Xing. If you have anything to say, you can say it or go to Sister Yingmeng Feixu's house. These are the places I often go. Anyway, thank you for giving me some advice. Thank you

What should I do? I can't comment. What I say or what I do is not recognized.

The cold voice revealed a trace of unquestionable majesty A young and handsome prince came out. . . There are many interesting points. Please add more words and make the sentences more complex in your description.

Comment: You are watery enough.

I read your self-recommendation on the forum and found it quite pitiful. . . (Sorry this is my first impression of you) I think, first of all, since you are not pranking or taking things lightly, you should not name Nangong or Beigong. This is a major factor in Raven's character. Then, there is more description, and there is a bit too much dialogue in this chapter and the previous chapter. Then, the name Bai Xiaosheng also needs to be changed. If I change it to Xiao Baisheng, I can't use the name used in the famous book (could it be that you are a fan?). Then it's wordy, you just want to leave a message anyway, you are in the third person, so just introduce the background directly, the old man in the teahouse is also very offensive (sorry, no offense) Finally, considering your deeds of not posting a link on the forum, leaving a message saying you registered a new pen name but not saying which one, and no link, etc., You are really a noob! Please pay attention next time, not everyone is as free as me to look for your writing or pen name. Last but not least: I lament my youth that will never return, as a child in junior high school. . .

I registered a new pen name and published an article called Time Travel, which contains some time travel articles that I think are good. Come and play if you have time. You

What should I do? I forgot my password, my email address is wrong, and I can't write anything. Hey, I'll try again. If I still can't find the password, I'll revise it and reissue it under another pen name. Thanks. You