Demon King [GL]

It's a pretty good article. This plot can be written in millions of words. It's really not easy to condense it to this point without making people feel abrupt and affecting people's emotions.

It's a good story. I could definitely make it a little longer. The emotional changes and plot feel a little faster in the middle, but it's still good to watch.

The story is very good, I admire the author's structure. However, the mutual affection was not noticed. From the beginning of Mei's confession, Bai was hesitant, until the end he disguised himself as a maid. Although he finally took the initiative, it was only after Garuda exposed it that Mei recognized him. He was so hesitant. When he heard that Mei had spent eight hundred years, he first felt not distressed but evaded. I also know that I have done a lot of wrong things. When I was seriously injured, I left others alone and avoided them for three or four months (although I was cleansed). Didn't I think about making up for it? If Garuda didn't expose it, would she have stayed by her side and watched Mei spend the remaining decades? Emotionally, if you don't tolerate the bad, attack the bad.

I want to know the reason...

It was good, but it was over too quickly.

So pretty ah ah ah ah ah

Super touching! What a great article with a beginning and an end! This is definitely the most cunning Lily novel I have read in 2018! Madam, I really like you! ! I will be your fan from now on! ! !

In fact, the protagonist is the third bird, not reincarnation, right?

Sudden ending

The ending is full of flowers~ I ate the poison of dozens of chapters, and for the candy of two chapters, I felt complicated. Why don't you consider publishing some extras for the college entrance examination?