The Actress Does Anything but Her Job Every Day

After reading today's update, I am satisfied. I feel like I need to give a serious review anyway, but since I don't often write reviews, I hope you won't be offended if I have something bad to say. First of all, the article itself, the background of Jinjiang, time travel, rebirth, system, entertainment industry, there are many hot spots. The combination of multiple hot spots is really interesting and creative enough. The explosive point is given right away at the beginning. As the heroine, Guan Murong commits suicide and is reborn, and is also told that she is the heroine of a novel. If this was put in a suspense drama, it should be a classic with a big twist at the end. It is really a pity to give it at the beginning. Because of the support of these background settings, the main line of the article is also very clear, which is to capture illegal time travelers and the path to career advancement. According to this main line, it feels very watchable. Looking at this situation, the male protagonist Cheng Haolin should also be a time traveler with his own system? It would be interesting if that were the case. Of course, it could also be that I think too much about his mystery and look forward to seeing the hero and heroine meet again. Then, I usually make some small comments. Of course, I may also make these small mistakes, but they are just my personal opinions. A thousand readers have a thousand Hamlets, so it doesn't necessarily have to be corrected. The line about Murong's rebirth is not enough. The reason why I say this is because the heroine came back from the dead, probably because the interval was estimated to be less than 24 hours, which is equivalent to just having a dream. She was obviously cheated on and indirectly led to death. Murong's emotions in this were too bland, and she could not feel the urgency of her rebirth and revenge. The reason why rebirth is popular is because of the God's perspective of re-lived life (of course, in this setting, the God's perspective reflects from another side), and the tendency to break out of the previous tragic encounters. However, after the heroine was reborn, she did not feel that there was an additional system to help her provide some plug-in props, and there was no obvious sense of growth. Although revenge was arranged, the words and gestures still felt like being beaten by the villain No. 1 Yu Xin in all aspects, which wiped out the joy of rebirth and cheating. If we want to highlight the villain and she is evenly matched, I think it is not impossible, but the heroine's momentum needs to change. At present, she is still the same Guan Murong. As long as the ball is removed, I think she will still die if she cheats again. At the same time, when he found out that he was the heroine of the novel, his reaction was also briefly mentioned. Should there be more emotional portrayal? Then there is the entertainment industry. I think Manman is more realistic. I feel that the celebrity feeling in the entertainment industry does not add enough atmosphere to people. It feels more like a group of ordinary people who work in acting, fighting openly and secretly. But I think since it is covered by the entertainment industry, the atmosphere is also very important. Many readers who read entertainment industry articles are familiar with this. When the other two female characters face each other and pretend to be fake, it feels like you want to highlight that neither of them is sincere, but the acting performance is too superficial. If you must make one person fake more obvious, let it be given to the villain. If the heroine can express, move, and tone at this time, it will be more real and friendly, which will give people a more comfortable feeling of being reborn as a queen. In terms of writing, Manman's rhythm is very good. The words are not sloppy and the rhythm is very suitable. However, I personally feel that there is a small problem. There are some unnecessary details, such as the doctor's explanation for a long time after discharge and passers-by, such as greeting the director when going to the set (it will have no impact to write these paragraphs in one stroke). It is unnecessary to use more pen and ink to elaborate the details~ The above is just a small opinion from a pure reader ~ I hope it is not too abrupt ~

... This system is disgusting.

Encourage me dear, I saw your article in the same review building before. The writing style is very smooth and the rhythm is good. It is much better than mine. I will help you eliminate 0 replies. Come on~