A quick note: This story is complete. It's a semi-historical wuxia romance with a fast pace and a relatively short word count. It's a serious, rather tragic story, so feel free to give it a try.
Blurb:
"When you ride hard with your whip raised, is that when you feel most carefree and happy?"
"But one day, you'll see the Qinhuai River stained red with blood; feel the Great Wall forged from the clang of weapons and the pounding of warhorses at Yanmen Pass; and see the bright moon behind the Yan Mountains, forever beyond your reach."
A side note:
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Theme: Through the protagonist's tragic life, the story reflects on the meaning of life and resistance to fate, while expressing the idea that the nation and its people are one, along with the protagonist's deep love for their homeland.
I didn't see the names of the male and female protagonists at first, so I looked back at the copywriting, and found that it was biased towards sadism... I usually refuse to finish writing sadistic stories... But there are so few good martial arts novels. Now that I see it, at least this article really makes me think it's worth reading! Come on! I hope you can stick to your martial arts dream?
I collected it a long time ago, why are there so few comments?
The concluding sentences are all so well written. When will the Grand Nam Hwa Kee open?
The last long review was written impulsively, and I got a lot of complaints before I even had time to touch it. This time I will seriously comment again. For those who are passing by, please don't bother me:
1. Ask
In the Internet age where information is abundant, it may not be difficult to write hundreds of thousands of words in a novel. The difficulty lies in calming down and controlling the sense of proportion, and hiding the main idea between the lines without being obtrusive. This is a great job. Take a look at these sentences in the full text:
"People outside the world are actually the ones who can't let go. This song is just a little obsession in their hearts."
"Cultivation of one's body when one is born in the world, and one's mind when entering the world."
"War is more than just protection... It is a fire that burns into the heart. It is a thunderbolt from the sky above the head, a stormy wave coming in the face, a bitterness that cannot be swallowed in the mouth, a knife inserted into the chest that cannot be pulled out. It is a mountain of bones, a river of blood and killing, it is darkness, despair, and the catastrophe of annihilation for all people in the world."
The good thing about martial arts novels is not only the characters' decisiveness in life and death, grudges and grudges, but also their understanding and practice of "Tao". Only by daring to ask can one be chivalrous and indomitable, "Even if there are thousands of people, I will go."
The so-called faith may not be so lofty, as long as you have an obsession with your relatives, friends, lovers, homeland, home country... You can finally make a hero come out, bring peace and health, and restore the great country.
2. True love
The children of Jianghu always have a good temperament, so they act chivalrously and righteously without fear of punishment or life or death.
"She held her master in her right hand and her sister in her left hand. In this way, she felt in her heart that she owned the whole world."
"'Sex cannot be changed, and fate cannot be changed.' Although Miss Chu is dead, she is actually alive."
"Chu Yanyuan's madness finally came to this cold tombstone."
"Yes, there are thousands of heroes in the world, but there is only one Gu Liusheng."
Brothers, sisters, masters, apprentices, and lovers all have true feelings for each other. The steadfastness of Gu Liusheng and Xiao Nanxing, the determination of Chu Jianyan and Chang Wan, the persistence of Xia Yi and Gongsun Yuan... There is no deliberate emphasis on the protagonist, highlighting the difference between big and small people. All the people in the same way are sincere and sincere. For the lofty ideals in their hearts, to look north to thousands of miles of rivers and mountains, they live to die without regrets or regrets.
3. Language
Ancient novels must have a sense of textual distance. This is to better fit the historical background and create a story atmosphere that is in line with that era. It is not to make people feel difficult and obscure. I think it has been done very well. It does not make people feel unfamiliar or abrupt, and can still feel the lingering antique flavor.
Of course, in order to maintain the update speed, a few areas may need more consideration. The momentum of some characters' speeches is still a bit lacking, and the character traits and sense of scene need to be strengthened. I guess it will be basically perfect once the bugs are caught, so I don't need to find fault with it.
Postscript: Where great principles are lost, there is benevolence and righteousness; when there is wisdom, there is hypocrisy... In the eyes of future generations, the Southern Song Dynasty may not be able to escape the constraints of the word "useless", but often only in such an era can there be impassioned tragedies and countless heroes for future generations to watch and admire. Such stories can never be seen or written enough.
There is a moon in Yanshan Mountain, and the rivers and lakes remain silent; the green mountains remain unchanged, and the green water flows forever. Looking forward to seeing you in the next chapter~
Ahaha, I like Luoluo girl~
The long river of history is rolling forward, and those who look back can't help but linger occasionally, because although there was no developed material civilization in the past years, there were countless heroes and good times and beautiful scenery. The impetuous world needs someone to taste and show such a calm mind~ The long comment is coded secretly, wait for me! ! !
So generous, the red envelope is huge!
Decisively accepted it. The writing is really good, and the martial arts is not popular. I really hope more people can see it. I admire Da Da's perseverance. My original intention was to write a traditional martial arts novel, but I couldn't bear the loneliness and wrote a Jianghu fantasy.
I crossed the mountains, climbed over the iron fence, and lurked here, just to hit you with one!
I didn't see the names of the male and female protagonists at first, so I looked back at the copywriting, and found that it was biased towards sadism... I usually refuse to finish writing sadistic stories... But there are so few good martial arts novels. Now that I see it, at least this article really makes me think it's worth reading! Come on! I hope you can stick to your martial arts dream?
I collected it a long time ago, why are there so few comments?
The concluding sentences are all so well written. When will the Grand Nam Hwa Kee open?
The last long review was written impulsively, and I got a lot of complaints before I even had time to touch it. This time I will seriously comment again. For those who are passing by, please don't bother me: 1. Ask In the Internet age where information is abundant, it may not be difficult to write hundreds of thousands of words in a novel. The difficulty lies in calming down and controlling the sense of proportion, and hiding the main idea between the lines without being obtrusive. This is a great job. Take a look at these sentences in the full text: "People outside the world are actually the ones who can't let go. This song is just a little obsession in their hearts." "Cultivation of one's body when one is born in the world, and one's mind when entering the world." "War is more than just protection... It is a fire that burns into the heart. It is a thunderbolt from the sky above the head, a stormy wave coming in the face, a bitterness that cannot be swallowed in the mouth, a knife inserted into the chest that cannot be pulled out. It is a mountain of bones, a river of blood and killing, it is darkness, despair, and the catastrophe of annihilation for all people in the world." The good thing about martial arts novels is not only the characters' decisiveness in life and death, grudges and grudges, but also their understanding and practice of "Tao". Only by daring to ask can one be chivalrous and indomitable, "Even if there are thousands of people, I will go." The so-called faith may not be so lofty, as long as you have an obsession with your relatives, friends, lovers, homeland, home country... You can finally make a hero come out, bring peace and health, and restore the great country. 2. True love The children of Jianghu always have a good temperament, so they act chivalrously and righteously without fear of punishment or life or death. "She held her master in her right hand and her sister in her left hand. In this way, she felt in her heart that she owned the whole world." "'Sex cannot be changed, and fate cannot be changed.' Although Miss Chu is dead, she is actually alive." "Chu Yanyuan's madness finally came to this cold tombstone." "Yes, there are thousands of heroes in the world, but there is only one Gu Liusheng." Brothers, sisters, masters, apprentices, and lovers all have true feelings for each other. The steadfastness of Gu Liusheng and Xiao Nanxing, the determination of Chu Jianyan and Chang Wan, the persistence of Xia Yi and Gongsun Yuan... There is no deliberate emphasis on the protagonist, highlighting the difference between big and small people. All the people in the same way are sincere and sincere. For the lofty ideals in their hearts, to look north to thousands of miles of rivers and mountains, they live to die without regrets or regrets. 3. Language Ancient novels must have a sense of textual distance. This is to better fit the historical background and create a story atmosphere that is in line with that era. It is not to make people feel difficult and obscure. I think it has been done very well. It does not make people feel unfamiliar or abrupt, and can still feel the lingering antique flavor. Of course, in order to maintain the update speed, a few areas may need more consideration. The momentum of some characters' speeches is still a bit lacking, and the character traits and sense of scene need to be strengthened. I guess it will be basically perfect once the bugs are caught, so I don't need to find fault with it. Postscript: Where great principles are lost, there is benevolence and righteousness; when there is wisdom, there is hypocrisy... In the eyes of future generations, the Southern Song Dynasty may not be able to escape the constraints of the word "useless", but often only in such an era can there be impassioned tragedies and countless heroes for future generations to watch and admire. Such stories can never be seen or written enough. There is a moon in Yanshan Mountain, and the rivers and lakes remain silent; the green mountains remain unchanged, and the green water flows forever. Looking forward to seeing you in the next chapter~
Ahaha, I like Luoluo girl~
The long river of history is rolling forward, and those who look back can't help but linger occasionally, because although there was no developed material civilization in the past years, there were countless heroes and good times and beautiful scenery. The impetuous world needs someone to taste and show such a calm mind~ The long comment is coded secretly, wait for me! ! !
So generous, the red envelope is huge!
Decisively accepted it. The writing is really good, and the martial arts is not popular. I really hope more people can see it. I admire Da Da's perseverance. My original intention was to write a traditional martial arts novel, but I couldn't bear the loneliness and wrote a Jianghu fantasy.
I crossed the mountains, climbed over the iron fence, and lurked here, just to hit you with one!
Have a good rest ~ Looking forward to coming back