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I just saw the author's reply, and after thinking about it, I would like to give myself an explanation and my overall thoughts on the author's article. First of all, the early stage of this article is really attractive. The writing style is relaxed and the plot is funny. The connection is natural and in-depth step by step. The relationship between the two heroines is also sweet and warm. But since the little fox knew that he was Huaisang, the plot suddenly entered an uncontrollable situation. The plot began to gradually unravel until it was inexplicable near the end. The scenes with the supporting characters who appeared later became more and more nonsensical. The plot seemed to come up one after another, and from the occurrence of new events to the resolution, it felt like child's play. What bothers me the most is the weakening of the character of the other heroine. When she was still an ignorant little fox, her interaction with Jiuxiao was very funny and natural. The two sides interacted with each other. It was interesting and I could feel their emotional rise and sweetness in their daily interactions. But also from the moment the little fox awakens to Sanghuai's identity, it's as if she suddenly retreated from the little fox's life. She doesn't know anything and can't participate in every incident that happens to Sanghuai. She just becomes a flirt waiting for her every time she comes back. Moreover, such flirting remains the same, and it's really boring to have more of it. The plot about Jiuxiao only revolves in two repeated plots. One is worried about Sang Huai's safety while being uneasy about Sang Huai's departure. The other is waiting for Sang Huai to come back to coax her after each incident. The two talk sweetly, and Sang Huai and Nan Mo enter the next dungeon plot. When it is over, the above two plots are repeated until the end of this article.

It was hard to say anything when I saw this, and I suddenly felt uninterested. There is something messy inserted in the middle. According to the popular saying now, it is water injection, and one of the protagonists is playing tricks on the side. Forget it, that's it for now.

I don't like to let go, it's an inexplicable feeling. Where is Jiuxiao?

Put it on quickly? But it's a bit confusing

Haha, Erdan is really poor.

Don't tease me, think carefully@~@!

Okay, sit back and wait (well-behaved and cute).

It will be over so soon_(:_‖∠)_

Huaisang: The girl in front, your wife is missing~

Tsk tsk tsk, the author's face is even worse than Huaisang's.