
[Bleach Fanfiction] Air-Cutting Void
[BLEACH同人]断空
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 235k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 16y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
64Chapters
1.9kFavorites
8.1Score
13Nutrient gifts
21.4kClicks per chapter
1kComments
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God, I saw my favorite Death fanfic in junior high school. Maybe someone will read my comment in the next ten years [Spread flowers]
It's so emotional 🙏 The earliest comment was nine years ago 🥺 What's everyone's life in the comment area like now 🤩 And the quality is really good, teacher 🥺 I'm so full [spread flowers]
This is the first Toshiro fanfic I've read (I even registered a Jinjiang account for my review...) And I feel that many aspects of his character have been well handled by Tears. . Cold on the outside but warm on the inside~ It's a really good article. The heroine Yun Shang is a heart-wrenching child. . She wasn't confident enough at first, but Toshiro clearly liked her very much! (Actually, I really don't comment... I just want to leave a paw print...)
I'm crying, I don't know if you have any impression of me. I once left a message at the end of "Snap". Oh no~ I cried so much that there are so many readers and good friends who must have forgotten me (crying). I have been following tear-jerking stories since 2008. Wen, who was full of tears, accompanied him throughout the third year of junior high school and high school. When I published "Dunkong", my pen name was still a string of English words. I remember that in the third grade of junior high school, I even skipped the afternoon tutoring class in order to watch "Dunkong", and the teacher punished me, but I was willing to do so (the tearful text is so beautiful) Later, when I saw "The Moment" written in tears, I kept chasing, chasing, chasing silently. It was super hard, because Apple didn't even show up at that time. The Internet was completely disconnected at home, and my parents refused to buy me a touch-screen mobile phone. I used my old Sony Ericsson push-button phone with an ultra-small screen to read bit by bit under the covers, and I admired my perseverance. During class, I would also draw the image of Yun Shang in my textbook. Also because of the push-button phone, I can't leave a message~ (crying) Because I cried a lot, I fell in love with writing. The influence of Tears on me is really huge. It is not an exaggeration to say that I am an enlightening teacher! Now I am in my senior year of high school. I finally gained some confidence in my writing skills, so I finally plucked up the courage to write a long review on Tears at the beginning of school four years later. I don't know if I can see the tears (crying) Sorry, I accidentally said too much nonsense, I hope I can forgive you. Let's start the long review: "Broken Sky" is a warm and fairy tale-like story. The first is the protagonist Toshiro. The author's portrayal of Toshiro's character is outstanding. Not only does it fit the original work, but it also perfectly portrays his cold appearance and warmth in his bones. Personally, I think that the psychological portrayal of the text is better than that of the comics. In my opinion, the image of Toshiro has been further sublimated by the great tears. Then there is the heroine Yun Shang. She is as kind as the girls around us, kind, considerate, and silently dedicated to the people she loves. We seem to be able to see a beautiful girl dancing among the butterflies. And at the same time, she is powerful. Such a girl is the most attractive. Yun Shang's feelings for Dong Shilang are very sad. This resonates with us again. Everyone has had a similar experience of secret love, right? A hazy love, a simple and dustless obsession, just to stand by that person's side. Yun Shang was lucky. In the end, she reaped her own happiness. And we are happy for Yun Shang and Dong Shilang, and then quietly pick up the silly obsessions we once had, put them into a smile, and let them dissipate in the rose-colored wind. I have never seen anything as original and deeply rooted in people's hearts as Yun Shang in other fanfics (except for the empty mirror in "Snap"). The author's writing skills and perception of details and beauty are much higher than the fan fiction I have seen. And all of this has been further improved in "Setsuna". Lei Da keeps moving forward and going further and further. At any time, please do not forget the original intention of writing the article. In the most desperate times, please remember that there is still a silent me supporting you from afar. Although, I can't come to your side. Off topic: I saw the article "To Us" that made me cry. I'm in tears, I believe you will have many readers like me who have been following it since 2008. The writers on the current list are far from being as well-educated as Lai Da. There are some authors who may climb the list by pleasing readers. They also feel uncomfortable inside. Writing is actually a kind of spiritual enjoyment. If what you write is all about vulgar taste and catering to the public, this enjoyment will no longer exist. Kenji Miyazawa, the author of "Galaxy Railroad Journey," published his work after his death and became a hit. His status in the hearts of Japanese people even surpasses Natsume Soseki and Kawabata Yasunari. At any time, just remind yourself of the original intention of writing the article. Incoherent. Did you know? Your writing has a huge impact on me. My junior high school and high school years were no longer boring because of your company. It's great to see your article. I wrote a small poem to bring tears to my eyes, to the winter lion, and to Yun Shang. To accompany me through the years of junior high school and high school. In early spring when cherry blossoms are flying, In the midsummer when the cicadas chirp in the wind, At the beginning of autumn when maple leaves are like blood, In the cold winter when the sky is full of snow, In these four years, I have actually been watching you. Never left. You keep moving forward on the bamboo-green page calmly and calmly, Bring us beautiful stories one by one. And I'm waiting right behind you. After all these years, it doesn't matter that you don't know I exist. But that doesn't matter anymore. When I see your story and writing, I know that you are happy inside. That's enough. (Caught in tears: What kind of poem is this!)
Na Na~ Can I reprint this article? Please please~
>///< The tearful articles are all beautifully written! Like~\\(≧▽≦)/~ The little white horse is the cutest and cutest! [Cover face]
I really like this article Watched it 3 times Although Setsuna writes better But I don't like sadness
"The boy's body suddenly stiffened." Ugh. . Well, the kid is already so big. Xiaobai is still a teenager. You are so strong.
A loving article~ with a smile I watched "Shigure" yesterday, and I always felt that the writing style was very similar to "The Big Eye of Tears". {I didn't expect it was really yours~~} I'm crying, let me ask you a question. Why do you write so many novice articles? Is it just because you like Xiaobai? Ah, right. This is Shi. You can call me Shizi or Xiaoshi~ with a smile. Hello, I'm crying~
Not bad~ support Xiao Lei's article! It's really well written~ Holding a bouquet for Xiao Lei~ By the way, how old is Xiao Lei? And what's the music in the background? It sounds great~~~Have you ever thought about opening another death pit? I'll go cheer for you~