The Older Sister Is a Mysterious Creature

It's quite outrageous in this version of the Ke system. A God-killing formation can solve all problems. I can only say that God is too easy to kill.

Finally completed the full text, a rare Cthulhu theme. The mysterious atmosphere created by the author in the early stage is very picturesque, and the plot is also relaxed and relaxed. In the middle and later stages of the plot, the plot development momentum is insufficient, and the supporting characters in the early stage only promote the development of the plot in the later stage. This is a pity (it feels that the supporting characters and the story can be more fleshed out and complement the protagonist. For example, the two young ladies in the early stage). The suspense left by the plot also becomes dull as the plot progresses and develops, and the sense of suspense is not considered. I think the mystery of the creation is much lighter than that of the early stage, and there will be more popular science explanations in the later stage. It's a bit of a pity. One of the female protagonists; the goddess Naijia's character is very three-dimensional, and the author's intentions can be seen (because the female protagonist has very few verbal expressions in the character setting, so more pen and ink are needed to describe the character's personality and image) The same goes for the female protagonist Luo Yu. But it is a pity that the growth and change of the heroine Luo Yu is not obvious (although the author said she will grow), but she is more like a crying little white flower (just a little pitiful haha). By the end of the plot, Luo Yu has not been able to complete the transformation well. In terms of plot, I feel that the protagonist is very powerful, but he is always frustrated by some weak villains (I personally feel that the protagonist is already at the level of a god, but he is still entangled with these weak villains. I always feel that it can be developed at a higher plot level, personal opinion~) I feel like after saying so much, I am talking about shortcomings. The author won't hit me (laughing) Of course, there are many advantages. The author's descriptions are remarkable, very detailed and elegant (especially when he is busy writing beautiful pictures, hehe). I would like to compare them to the descriptions of many authors in the Lily District, which are rough, general and mechanical. (Not only the characters, scenes, plots and even some details), although it should leave room for the readers' imagination, it is too blank and empty, which makes it embarrassing to look at╮()╭It is hard for a clever woman to make a meal without rice. The author also has his own control and rhythm in the plot, but it still fell apart in the later stages. As he was talking, he accidentally mentioned some shortcomings. Hehehe, but you, the author, are still great. Finally, I personally like this type of subject matter very much, and the author is one of the few authors who writes about this type of subject matter. Of course, you should take good care of the treasured author~ Finally, finally! I am looking forward to your next work as an author! I hope you, the author, can create better works than Xinxin~

It's really good-looking, and it suits my taste

Beautiful! Looking forward to the new book!

When will you write another Lily?

Complete the scattered flowers! What a wonderful idea! What impressed me most was Xiao Lu's statement that human beings instinctively believe that the closer to God's existence is, the more beautiful it is. I almost believed it [!

Damn, are you still writing Lily?

The words made me laugh to death So that's how it is...(Suddenly I felt a pity that I didn't see Chai Wife Crematorium [Dog Head])

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