Starlight Falls into the Sands

It can be seen that the author wants to change from romance to romance, but unfortunately, as the author himself said, he lacks ability, has no willpower, and has too many logic bugs. He has created a big structure and tried to connect each link, but the result is scattered and cannot support the expected story. . . Most of the entire story is devoted to the escape team, but regardless of the unclear escape route, it does not build a clear geographical background in the reader's mind. But this is all messed up in the novel... And the team members are marginalized and forgotten from time to time in the process (the boss's head seems to disappear in the ending, maybe I missed that part?), Even the number of cars in the convoy, who is in which car is inconsistent, and sometimes it is an Explorer, and sometimes it is off-road, can't it be said whose car is whose car? It's hard to remember~ When you go to Wudaoliang for supplies, you send a little brother to monitor it? Is this because she is afraid that the heroine will not be able to contact the police? And Quan Xiao, taking this guy who can only consume resources along the way, just to help him drive to the military fortress? In order to use his mouth to tell the heroine that Wang Kun is coming? ? ? There is no need for it. For a ruthless person like Pei, it is more in line with his behavior to silence him directly~ Speaking of the military fortress, the foreshadowing did not mention that Pei's route was to the military fortress. The visiting route was all determined by Pei, but in the process, the heroine appeared from time to time. The arrangements made by the military fortress for the destination, including the supplies consumed at the military fortress, and the No. 3 Team to ambush there, maybe the author remembered it later and explained later that the heroine and Pei discussed and decided to go to the military fortress. . . In the plot of a confrontation between several parties in this place, the police clearly knew that there were several people on the opposite side, so the police arranged an ambush with a team of four? ? ? It's clear that we're going to set up an ambush and catch them all, shouldn't we deploy as many police forces as possible? And you were blinded just because the signal was blocked? Then the police force is too weak. . . When it comes to Peng luring the female protagonist to the swamp, I can see that it was the male protagonist who helped. It was the male protagonist who analyzed the existence of glaciers and swamps, and analyzed that Peng wanted to eliminate all insiders through natural traps. It was the male protagonist who fed the bait to the female protagonist. According to his character, who takes every step of the way, shouldn't he take precautions in advance, and just encourage the female protagonist to arrest people? ? ? Later, he said in hindsight that Peng knew that they would leave for Glacier in advance, and Peng would use this to set up a trap. Then Peng went back and attacked Gu... Oh my God, the male protagonist's trap failed~

This is the first time I read this kind of novel that emphasizes plot over romance. I thought it would be boring, but I was still attracted to Qu Ye and Xun Ge unconsciously. I like their characters, especially the two of them who have double A and a tacit understanding. Spread flowers, sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers~

While they are trying their best to exaggerate the image of the female protagonist as a captain who is cool and attractive and has strong personal abilities, but if you read carefully, almost all the events in the story are handled by the male protagonist, and the character design is flimsy and thin. How could the subject matter that was obviously very good in the early stage end up like this...

We are in a book shortage, so after reading this book, I will continue the book shortage

That's right! Focus on plot and light on romance! The road story is really good~ The environment and atmosphere are very immersive, and you are drawn into it all at once, and the driving adventure step by step is very exciting. The glaciers, snowy mountains, deserts, and red cliffs are the most picturesque! Send flowers to Dazai?

The plot is great, great, great! Like, like, like??

You protect the world and I protect you

I think the heroine's character is unpredictable to me. She seems to like to kick people, which seems very rude. Also, it feels so strange that Fu Xun kicked the stool and left as soon as he found out that he was the financial backer behind Xinghui.

It's beautiful and has a suspenseful line. Highly recommended!

I like the author's articles very much. Basically, the plots are compact and rarely require me to skip reading. I will continue to support them.