Love Like a Breeze

Come on, HOHOHOHO

Come on, HOHOHOHO

Come on, HOHOHOHO

It feels better than the one you wrote before Come on, HOHOHOHO

Oops, I thought of what you and I said before, MS is in TL, right~~ Do you remember to pull it

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The writing is good! But this Su Qianqian's problem is a bit extreme~~~~Maybe she doesn't believe in friendship~~~~~But that slap was so satisfying! Hehe! Come on, come on! The author's reply: Well, what should I say? In the past, Su Qianqian had no friends. Tang Meng was her only one and the support of her soul, so she was hit so hard when she discovered the truth~!

I give you two points because of Qian Qian's transformation. Although she may become a serious bad boy to others, I admire her very much. Keep up the good work. Author's reply: If classmate Qianqian knew that Qin supported her so much, she would definitely be very happy, haha~! ^-^

Well, I've made a suggestion! Come on, keep working hard to fill in the pits! The author's reply: Promise not to give up~!

Uh-huh, it's a very natural beginning, light and normal, but closer~ The description of the characters and psychology is very detailed, very good, like a child~~ A small suggestion: Is Tang Meng's monologue a bit too straightforward? Did he talk about his baby like this? Haha~~ Moreover, Xiao Qianqian's transformation can be more natural! Not bad, not bad, I decided to follow the trap! Come on, author~~~`Author's reply: Thank you dear~! This is a very good suggestion, I will work hard to modify it~! ^O^