Looking back at this article, I found that my writing status in 2018 was not good. After signing the contract, my data started to improve a bit, but I immediately fell into a fantasy book. I couldn't see the future and thought, "Is this the end of my writing career?" I hurriedly wrote this short story as a practice. I knew that the writing was not good, and I never dared to click on it again. I didn't even dare to read the comments from readers. I picked it up again today and found that it is not as bad as I thought. Let me write down some thoughts.
Let me talk about the good points first. I have always felt that the description of environmental details is my weakness. Now when I look back, this book is inexplicably smooth at this point. The use of historical events as the background of the story gives a sense of weight, and the opium background reflects the loneliness of the characters. I also like these. The bad thing is that it is too short. The emotional development of one person and one monkey could use a longer time line to match the clear and thick emotions I want to write. Another problem is that the lines of the characters are some OOC and are not pleasing to the eye. The main and supporting characters are both, but this is an old problem of mine, so I won't go into details.
In the end, I didn't understand it. Since the dynasty has been destroyed and there are no more eunuchs, why is the grass in this area still being cut? Anyway, it's too cruel, but it's great ಠ_ರೃ
Looking back at this article, I found that my writing status in 2018 was not good. After signing the contract, my data started to improve a bit, but I immediately fell into a fantasy book. I couldn't see the future and thought, "Is this the end of my writing career?" I hurriedly wrote this short story as a practice. I knew that the writing was not good, and I never dared to click on it again. I didn't even dare to read the comments from readers. I picked it up again today and found that it is not as bad as I thought. Let me write down some thoughts. Let me talk about the good points first. I have always felt that the description of environmental details is my weakness. Now when I look back, this book is inexplicably smooth at this point. The use of historical events as the background of the story gives a sense of weight, and the opium background reflects the loneliness of the characters. I also like these. The bad thing is that it is too short. The emotional development of one person and one monkey could use a longer time line to match the clear and thick emotions I want to write. Another problem is that the lines of the characters are some OOC and are not pleasing to the eye. The main and supporting characters are both, but this is an old problem of mine, so I won't go into details.
In the end, I didn't understand it. Since the dynasty has been destroyed and there are no more eunuchs, why is the grass in this area still being cut? Anyway, it's too cruel, but it's great ಠ_ರೃ