Her Little Nemesis [Showbiz]

Very strong and heavy emotions, very light and clever brushwork.

It's so well written, I read it all night

Come back and have a look again

When will the author continue writing? I really like your writing. I have read every book several times.

The author's writing style is actually very good. Why is this book so powerful? Because most people like to read interesting articles.

Although I hope Wansui can be happy, when I see her new CP, I will always think of her and Mika

I started reading Baihe articles last year. At that time, I came across an earlier article by the author, the first piece of the trilogy. Later I found the source and started chasing Mika's article in Jinjiang. The author actually writes very well, narrating the story of being broken up in a plain way, with many details well written, such as the rubber band. I find this narrative style very touching. The first-person perspective allows me to feel the lover's mood through myself. It is hazy and similar to my first love in high school. I doubt this and that, always guessing, and of course it is sad enough. When I watched it early on, I felt that the psychological description of the second heroine was lacking in the first person. It would be nice if it could be more detailed, otherwise, always abusing one person would make people doubt whether the love is necessary to continue. I always hope that the process of torture will be more detailed. Later, the author's articles became longer than the previous article, especially the last one. In many places, he interspersed his own reflections on the feelings of writing on readers. When I first read it, I found it very interesting and quite Buddhist-like. Of course, I also felt helpless. If you read too much, you will naturally think that it is just watering down. The plot is too slow and the protagonist's emotional line is not developed, so you have the idea of ​​​​abandoning the story. I read it intermittently. To be honest, it is very exciting when condensed. Many details of the content are very impressive. The trilogy actually has a richer plot and more three-dimensional characters than the last, but it does have a lot of unnecessary things, which scares away many readers. I don't mean to accuse... You can try to change, no one can say, but I really don't want to watch the author become more and more discouraged, with fewer and fewer readers, and finally give up writing. I really don't mean anything else, I'm just expressing my feelings.

This kind of chain is also used in Juse Wei's confession! I really like some of the details or plots that the author repeats.

It feels like I didn't write anything, so I locked it. But my resentment is not as deep as that of Dong Jingjing being locked up for 3 chapters!

Laughing to death, Jinjiang's review is much more sensitive than the author's writing, and I'm covered in **** (I'm curious if I can post this?