New Novel Link: The Delicate Flower Won't Wait to Marry
Su Qinyu is a well-rounded Song Dynasty young woman with a good family background, excellent grades, and lovely looks. She should have married into a good family like any ordinary woman, supporting her husband and raising children. Instead, through a twist of fate, she became an aging literary woman.
Su Qinyu: Zhou Huairuo, will you marry me?
Zhou Huairuo looks up from his abacus, dazed: Huh? What did you just say?
Su Qinyu: ...
Chen Yingtang: I'll marry you! I will! (Raises his hand eagerly)
Prince of Anding: Me too, me too! (Raises his hand high)
Su Qinyu: ...
The Emperor: She's one of the people in my palace. What are you two making a fuss about?
Su Qinyu: Your Majesty, you don't have a part in this story. Did you wander onto the wrong set...?
Zhou Huairuo: What's going on? Do I have to draw lots and queue up all over again?
Upcoming novel: Reborn: A Military Academy Romance Guide. A reborn young policewoman's military academy romance diary. Scheduled to begin in May.
Blurb: Su Xiaoqi's soul enters another world and she becomes Luo Xiaoqi, a demonic cult witch: a good-for-nothing with no memories and no abilities, yet somehow a walking cure-all, coveted by all like the legendary Tang Monk's flesh. A hero who saves the beauty? No such thing. So she can only rely on herself, since relying on Heaven or Earth is no use.
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This is my first time writing an article and it's already pretty good! Come on, author! I read other people's comments that the writing style is like lyrics, but I don't think there's anything wrong with that. On the contrary, it's a personal style. This is the setting, oh, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, the heroine is over 30 (originally, it is very difficult to write from the perspective of this age in youth romance novels, because although you have traveled through time, your actual age must match the idea of actual age). From the article, the psychological age is probably 16... The love of love sprouts at every turn, and the character collapses in an instant. In fact, her description of Ye's feelings is quite good, but it develops too fast. She obviously fell in love with her after only seeing her for a few times... It's unacceptable... But the author has good writing skills. As for the grasp of emotional lines, it will come naturally if he writes more articles and pays more attention. The above is also my first impression after reading online articles for six or seven years. After all, I have never written anything and it is just an idea on paper. Anyway, come on!!
It's not that the writing is bad, the writing style is very good, and the story is well grasped. But if it were in the third person and the language was more cheerful, it would be very popular. Maybe the next book should be changed to a cheerful style of writing.
Damn, I suggest you change the name. It doesn't fit with the content. The writing is very good, but it's too sad.
Or it would be good to change the name. The content is really good, but the name is probably a big drag.
This style of writing. . . It looks like lyrics. . There is always a feeling that I want to sing_(:з∠)_
Come on, come on, come on! Did you make me cry?
The writing is quite artistic, with a fresh flavor and a touch of humor! Like it very much! Looks addictive??? Looking forward to subsequent updates! Come on come on???