Closer to Science

[On Hiatus for Major Revisions] Something about the writing just doesn't feel right. The character concepts and outline will stay the same, but I'm either doing a major revision or rewriting it. Feng Lai got into a car accident with his roommate. His head was smashed into a slab of Sachima. He lowered his head, pieced it back together, decided it still worked, and casually put it back on. Then he looked up and saw an extra moon in the sky. There was an eye growing on the moon. The eerie world and reality took turns appearing, and blood corpses roamed the deep forests. While fleeing for his life, he found a little white rabbit. The little rabbit was fair-skinned and beautiful, frail and sickly. He gasped after every couple of steps, clung to Feng Lai's sleeve, and obediently called him big brother. Then one day, the little white rabbit took off his clothes to bathe, revealing an eye on his shoulder. Feng Lai: ... Little White Rabbit: Big brother, hug me. Feng Lai: ... Little White Rabbit: Big brother, I'm scared. Feng Lai: ...I'm scared too. [Small Sailboat License] 1. The entire story is set in a fictional world. 2. The author's species is paramecium. I'm silly, but not mean. Feel free to nitpick the details. 3. Updates at 9 a.m. If I have to miss an update, I'll post a notice in advance. I won't abandon this story, and I take my writing seriously. Little angels, please add it to your favorites. Mwah! (Heart.)