After Returning from the Infinite Worlds

Good. However, many places are not fully written. It's like a snow mountain. I don't feel like digging to the bottom yet. There is an unpleasant feeling of neither getting better nor getting worse. Crying. Found out too late. What a pity

The more I thought about it in the middle of the night, the more I felt that it was not enough. I think if I wrote this book carefully, it would be at least about 500,000 words, but but! ! ! ! ! She really just finished it in 350,000 words. The extra chapter explained the previous foreshadowing and the direction of the story, that is to say! ! ! I still want to watch it, wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooones,, ​​​​​​​​​! ! ! ! ! Hateful! Let's do more extras! ! ! Modo Modo's extra story! ! ! ! ! Now that I have typed so many words, I will try to make up the number of words, hoping to achieve a long review. There's really not much to say about the characters in this book, they're super cool! ! ! ! ! ! The overall plot direction is also very good. It has its own outline and thinking, and there is no plot that is just for the sake of sweetness. It is really good (sentiment) but maybe it is too hasty to finish the 350,000 words. It always feels like the whole book is like an outline, but a very detailed outline. After all, all the stories The lines are very clear, and one section is finished and the next section is immediately followed. Well, I feel a little rushed. In fact, I can write more twists and foreshadowing. There is no need to be so anxious. Anyway, what I say is nonsense, and you don't have to listen. And my purpose is to make a long review, just take a look at it? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I I'm really afraid of being scolded. Wow. I mix a little more of the broken heart. Like broken glass?, The stupidity of love? It will never recover?, Flowing eastward? Can't renew the relationship. Why was it so serious in the first place? The broken heart is like broken glass?, The stupidity of love? It will never recover?

Second brush, this type is too suitable for my taste

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Extra! Damn, I want a side story! ! ! Qaq

Good luck with n's brushing day.

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I feel like many places are not explained clearly. The previous pitfalls and clues were not filled in. It was like there was too much foreshadowing in the early stages and not enough time, so the final ending was too hasty. It's a bit frustrating to watch.

5555 I was so sad after watching the ending, please give me more details! May the Dharma God be resurrected! Looking for personality fusion live! Please update the ten thousand words in this world!

The post-production was a little rushed, and many things were not explained clearly. The undead suit that I was looking forward to was finally silenced...